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Read both chapters of this story last night. I love it! more please...if you can or whenever ya have the time?

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Glad you enjoyed it. New chapter just dropped.

Can Pipsqueak be the Guards Pet? Aged up of course

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I'll see what I can do :raritywink:

Okay here. Can you add Big Mac to the list of Stallions. Sombra may like a draft horse.

i like the idea of Big Mac being evil! the brainwashing work but in a different way.
like mac wants power, his own slave's and his own lands he want to be somebody with power.
he has no delusions of overthrowing King Sombra he lusts after King Sombra as much as the other slaves, but he also knows he won't be King Sombra number one and because of that he wants power, power to take what he wants wen he wants it.

King Sombra has no idea were the brainwashing went wrong, but it went wrong in a vary interesting why! King Sombra will be rather fond of Big Mac he can play Sombra's games without effort wile knowing his place but Big Mac ambition is quite impressive especially since he can even leave the king of darkness in aw with all the dangerous games that Big Mac is willing to play with him.

Big Mac: i'm your slave, but i'm a smart Slave if i want anything i have to get it from you and to do that, are little games are necessary, but in the end you are the Almighty one who has the final say, I just have to turn you into my favor.

Oh my god this story is getting better and better!
here's my thoughts when reading the past chapters (one and two) but left out cause i forgot/ couldn't remember.
"an m/m & anthro story in mlp...omg yes! I must show this to a few writers i'm good friends with."
on chapter 3 - i knew the coupe wouldn't work! is twilight still sane?
finally on chapter 4 - Sunburst is a kinky yet evil stallion! love it.

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I'm very glad you like it so far!

Well i didn't expect that...like at all! i'm glad twilight & royal sisters are alive.
only one spelling error when sombra speaks to twilight's brother "Now, I didn’t really care 'for' before Shining."
you're a very good writer,especially for your first fic.

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Yeah, hard chapter to write but I had to get it out of the way so that I could move the story forwards. Thanks for pointing out the spelling error, it's been fixed now. Thank you for the kind words! :twilightsmile:

i like it. we have love stories were the good guys get their happy ending, I really like this concept of a bad guy having his happy ending!
i still want to see an evil big mac having his own pets like Braeburn, Soarin, and Jet Set "the harem of the three tribes" is what Sombra will call big macs harem! and big mac will rape and brace Jet Set himself in front of the king giving him a 5 star show.

p.s. i'm just having fun i don't expect anything from you i'm just letting my mind go wiled because i love this story!.

Sombra that feeling is love. Go get him

wow this is a good story, keep up the good work.

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Thanks for the suggestion. If I do have a harem the owner would most likely be Sunburst since he already has 1 pet pony. I do have plans for Big Mac, just haven't reached him yet.

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i'm guessing that he will join the bad side or that's what i hope? there are times we're brainwashing goes wrong but still has satisfying results and to change one character would be a satisfying results i think? but that's just me.

the idea of Big Mac wanting power is cool but he doesn't want King Sombra's power one thing he is as loyal is as loyal is anyone of Sombra's brainwash pets but he want his own power his own pets and his own pleasures witch is why he like to play the dangerous word games with King Sombra using words that will either get him blanked, killed, or rewarded and it's because of these games that Big Macintosh is the only one allowed to top the king...yup Big Mac is that skilled in the game of words.

i'm still just having fun is all😋

Nice job here. I do wonder what happened to Mac though, and Bulk. Bulk may be good at sexual massages and nut handelings due to his past.

Cant wait for more. and what is happening to AJ? :ajsmug:

Gah! I can't even find the words...cause it's so amazing.

Is discord gonna be in this, if so after training twilight would be a good pet.

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I haven't decided if Discord will be in here yet. He has a very unique personality that I have a hard time writing. But if I can figure it out then I'll probably find a way to work him in.

i want to see Big Mac verbally abusing the main 7! the beat part is what he said about them is true, no lie, no name calling, just facts in how they all went wrong.

I was kind'be hoping Toubleshoes would be in this and make a good daddy for Big Mac. A big boy needs and equally big daddy. Two muscle Earth Ponies under the delusion they are father and son under the service of the mighty King Sombra.

But I can't deny this was definitely hot to read

Comment posted by Disappointment-Incarnate deleted Sep 29th, 2018

Kind of sad to see this disappear.
Lotta males would've loved to see.

will this continue?

I was kinda hoping that Spike wouldn't be allowed to cum. That they all need permission to cum and having their rod be erect and frustrated is considered a sign of respect and loyalty towards Sombra.

Maybe it would be better if Sombra programmed in a reason for why the collar is bad to take off. Maybe a stallion without a collar can be beaten up and raped freely and without warning. That if they behave poorly the collar would be taken away and they become free game again.

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