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Having a best friend is a wonderful thing, especially when you're a little filly. But little fillies tend to fight over the silliest things, and headstrong fillies grow up to be proud ponies who refuse to let their pasts go. Take Rarity and Applejack for example...

Originally posted on ff.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7380712/1/Battles_and_Bickerin
Overall I'm not incredibly pleased with this fic. I tried not to project my usual writing style on this since it was my first fanfiction in a long time but I've come to regret it. Regardless, it is the only piece of MLP fic that I have finished so far so why not? Maybe I will re-write and expand the ending one day since it's a bit rushed, but probably not. Got bigger 'n' better ideas for future fics.

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i loved that. it was very funny with just a hint of drama. in fact, i got so caught up in the flashback that i forgot about the conversation. here, please accept my humble offering of the mighty torch of first.

love this fic...:yay:
serious no more coments?:rainbowderp::facehoof:

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