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Ayyyy man nice job. Other than a few typos, it's fine. Not you're best imo tho. The character telling us stories of his travels along with his heritage was cool even tho half way it felt like I was jumping from random scenario to random scenario. Still good tho![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Yay! No more reminiscing and on with the story! 👏
A couple of typos but still good![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
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Thanks Big Dawg. It's still in the experimental faze due to me never writing a FoE Story before. Hopefully the 3rd Chapter will turn out much better 👌🏿