Scootaloo is an orphan living in Canterlot after having been adopted by Rainbow Dash and her family. She's been plagued by nightmares of the night her parents were killed and of a monster that may have been responsible for it.
When the monsters start to re-appear she gets recruited by a mysterious government organization to fight them. Now she has to work to save the city and everyone in it from the Order, and she may not have to do it alone.
Henshin!
Obviously this is a crossover with the long running franchise Kamen Rider. We'll get into what that means much later.
Image made by RamenDriver.
"And, is she under the bed?"
"Yes."
"Great, so let's go and never look back."
"You take the words out of my mouth honey."
... I have no idea where this even came from...
Wheel of fortune?
To quote my favorite Kamen Rider: "Whenever evil wields power a Kamen Rider will appear. Every single time!"
At least not in your country
"How did he deal with it?"
"Well, that is the strange part, he just told me: 'Don't question me!'"
And Justice has picked his champion!
Ah, the cockroaches of the Kamen Rider universe
Cute
Definitely an interesting choice, most people would connect magician with Trixi.
Coincidincs
Oh, really now. BOARD will not be amused
What kind of voice does the Driver have anyway? More robotic or recorded?
Ah, I like this, I very much like this, but this nothing new now is it
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You disturb me sometimes.
Maaaaybe.
Indeed, as it should be, unless they have to fight five or more people in multi-colored spandex, it depends on the show really.
Yeah, continuity is great isn't it? But yeah, I meant in this country.
Oh good, you got the reference!
Yeah, even in the dark future where Oma Zi-O has taken over and destroyed most everything, Shocker is still scurrying around I'm sure.
What, I got caught up on Zi-O yesterday.
Yeah, originally it was just going to be called Fortune or whatever, but when it was suggested to include SMILE I kinda blended the two.
I enjoy not going with the obvious.
Well I needed someone to develop the Drivers.
No, no they will not... kinda funny actually since this was originally supposed to be a re-imagining of Blade.
Given how much of a nerd I am and based on Rails of Reality, it probably sounds like Majel Barrett.
Glad you like it, hopefully chapter 2 will be done soon.
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But all in all, jokes aside, solid chapter. And if this is in the human world, maybe there's potential for crossing over with other Kamen Rider series, like Wizard. I'd pay to see Haruto Soma, AKA the Last Hope appear.
So is this a original Kamen Rider concept within Equestria Girls universe?
9183215 More like a modified Kamen Rider universe where human versions of the characters from MLP exists.
9183214 Stop reading ahead Brick!
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Whistles innocently
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Happy to oblige
True indeed.
Of course, I did, I have a doctor in Nerdology
Yeah, about that nihonhero.weebly.com/uploads/5/5/5/3/55538907/dmkpyhkuyaadcuu_orig.jpg some people say it looks similar to the eagle of Shocker, so maybe? nihonhero.weebly.com/uploads/5/5/5/3/55538907/3_82_orig.jpg
Well, at least it is a reimagining of the Driver
Well, I learned something new today
Tarot, huh? Now that's an interesting theme. I look forward to seeing more.
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Well, my friend, you just made yourself even more likable by the way I second that
This is very interesting, I will definitely be keeping an eye on this
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*backs away slowly*
Or people dressed in magical armor modeled on wolves, again, it varies.
Good, keep an eye out for any other references.
Darn it Toei, bring back Foundation X already!
I mean seriously, its kinda similar, please be a coincidence, or at least do it well.
Yeah, the concept is very similar.
Yeah, its not really come up yet, but the morphers in Rails of Reality sound like her.
9183250 Yeah, originally it was going to be a re-imagining of Kamen Rider Blade, only you know, good, but I decided Tarot cards would be better.
9183271 Glad you like it so far.
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Oh, I have an idea for the next chapter
With these people behind the series? Yeah, I gave up hope on that a long time ago.
Huh, interesting.
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What's wrong with Blade? Keep in mind I haven't seen any of the 10 first Heisei except for Den-O and Kiva, only of which I really liked (Guess which) so I'm asking out of pure curiosity.
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Oh?
I like Zi-O so far, but it is only on episode 3...
Yes, I am a colossal nerd.
9183300 The characters are poorly written, the concept is good but not well executed, and while the ending was really good getting there is a problem because its just not easy to get through.
If you want a better idea, look up the reviewer ShintaReviews, he reviewed Blade recently.
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I won't spoil the surprise, but if you ask Brick he might be able to give you a hint
I already see some major problems. If it actually will happen like I'm expecting, this might actually rival my most hated Rider season...
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Okay.
Well, I'm still gonna give it a chance, its still too early to judge it honestly.
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To quote one of my personal favourites...
BAKURYŪ CHANGE!
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I'm a little concerned about Zi-O myself, honestly. I know it's still early, but so far I'm not that enthused. It feels like a significant step down from Ex-Aid and Build. It'll take a lot for me to quit it, granted (I stuck with Kyuranger after the uneven first episodes, after all), but still.
And what's your least favorite Rider, Layton13?
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Oh boy, unpopular Opinion: Kamen Rider Gaim.
I nearly hate the entire cast and the story is too fast and doesn't really delve into interesting parts enough in my opinion. I know that this is something that is very much tied to what I enjoy and Gaim really didn't play to these strengths.
My personal favorite episodes in most Rider seasons are mostly completely removed from the overarching plot and deal with small stories about random victims of the week. I generally care more about character than story anyway and Gaim was just not the series for me on that front.
Give me a by the book monster of the week show and I'll be happy if the filler episodes are interesting and give equal time to the victim and the heroes. Again, personal opinion.
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All right. I disagree with your opinion, but respect that you feel that way.
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Didn't expect anything else. It's an unpopular opinion. But hey, would be boring if we all liked the same thing.
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All of us reading this story like Kamen Rider. And there's nothing boring about that!
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You know what I mean. If everyone would just agree with everyone else stuff would get quite boring. I love discussion, it helps to figure out why we like the things we do and if you are only surrounded by people who agree with you will never learn that about yourself.
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Also in my own Kamen Rider story (ACTUAL Rider, not pony or EQG) I got the weird idea to create a religion based around Gaim since he's, you know, a space god now. So, guessing that's a turnoff for you.
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Oh, totally. Was just being tongue in cheek.
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Oh no, why would it? Kouta was actually one of the few people I liked in the story and the idea is great so why would I be against it? If they would have a religion based on Baron I would question why would anyone worship that idiot but if it gives something good for the story why should I complain?
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The religion is basically something I created as a one-off joke...and then it started building and building in my head and now I have this whole massive pantheon featuring all the Armored Riders, all of whom are worshipped in some capacity (except for Sid, because nobody likes him), Zawame's more or less become a holy city like Rome or Jerusalem people go on pilgrimmages to, a complex mythology, dancing is seen as a way of performing rites, it's growing increasingly popular on the world stage since Gaimists can say with complete accuracy that their gods are provably real...I'm going to have to write a story about this someday, aren't I?
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Probably, by the way, I love the idea. This is just gold.
Other things include fruit and fruit juice being popular food for Gaimists, Drupers becoming a sacred site, Takatora as the increasingly harried and tired prophet/Pope/CEO/guy in charge of everything and longing for sleep and/or death, the living Riders struggling to deal with their fame and worship and the knowledge that they're going to ascend to divinity one day since Kouta used his space god magic to bring back the deceased as space gods because why the hell not, Saver and Mars/Jam viewed as false gods, Kurokage troopers become standard law enforcement, Kouta's sister had to go into hiding since people keep harassing her to bless their children, some idiots trying to summon Inves because they think they're angels or dead loved ones and...not always being wrong...a part of me wants Evolt to be the devil even though he's from a different series since he more or less IS Space Satan.
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What's not to like about the guy? People who say he's boring, clearly they haven't heard of or see the signs of Survivor's Guilt.
As for that hint you mentioned to Ruin that I might know about... I legitimately don't have a clue as to what you're on about or have probably forgotten. Mind PMing me as to what it was?
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I would pay to see this AU.
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Agreed.
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Funnily enough, some guy (Named Shura) in one of the Gaidens, namely, Zack's did start a religion of sorts relating to Kaito. Shura even became Kamen Rider Black Baron till Zack beat his ass to a pulp with Jimber Marron arms. I kid you not.
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I remember. Part of Zack’s job in Gaimism is to punch people in the face and yell “THAT’S NOT WHAT KAITO WANTED YOU IDIOT!”
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Yeah, seeing Zack use a Jimber Arms and beat a Baron faker with so many delusions that it wasn't even funny to a pulp was so awesome in so many ways.
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He also goes around beating up other poseurs who misinterpret the words of the pantheon to justify doing awful shit, but mainly Baron fakers. (Though to be fair, Kaito's philosophy IS difficult to parse.) Many view him as the mortal voice of Baron, though as he has said on many times, "I may speak for Kaito, but he doesn't necessarily speak to me."
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Here's mine. GOKAI CHANGE!
Well, gotta say, really feeling the love between Scootaloo and Sweetie here. And I have to wonder, very curious about this aspect, what do the Legendary Riders think of a Kamen Rider showing up in America?
As for the Order... shudders That's all I'm going to say on the matter. Still thinking up a possible image song for Scootaloo, This I thought could work, but then I read the lyrics in English.
9199726 That is an excellent question... one that I do not have an answer to because I haven't thought of it yet. And the song could work, yeah.
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Wait seriously? You did see the lyrics right?
9199747 Okay, it could work then?
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Yeah, might need to find something else. This one might just work.
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Yeah, probably. There are a few Riders who would have loved that
That is normal for Rider Armors, well expect the G3 line, that is heavy as hell.
Since I already mentioned the predecessor: Kamen Rider Justice against Kamen Rider G4, now that would be interesting
Wouldn't want another Garen situation.
Cute
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Spoken like a true Kamen Rider!
Ok, that line is good
That name Ok, for clarification, that sound strangely similar to Sau Zwei, German for pig two, so kinda like the monster just insulted itself.
That one never gets old.
Ok, seriously, why are so many Toku stories on this site so god damn suggestive? Not that I'm complaining
Mhm, sure and Sougu is the king of video games
Emporer?
I'm blanking on this one
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I really like these two together
Well, not every rider has a bike, looking at you beast and Drive
Huh, my gears are turning
Ok, I cant resist:
I assume this is a referenc, so who could it be? Soichi, Shinji, Takumi ok maybe not him since yeah you know dead, Kenzaki, Wataru, Tsukasa, Eji, Haruto or Takeru. But my money is on either Kenzaki or Tsukassa.
... Wow, this got WAY longer than expected... ups
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Could be worse, could be Kiva's armor...
Damn right.
Well, not every rider has a bike, looking at you beast and DriveAnd Ryuki. He technically rides a Dragon.
I can answer that. It would be this guy. Kenzaki, AKA Kamen Rider Blade, the original Card user.
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currently watching Ryuki, so could be
he has two bikes, the dragon and the standard bike of the ryuki Riders.
As I thought. I limited to Blade and Decade since these two are generally known to travel a lot.
Okay, that is kinda freaky, I did not know Scootaloo was the Ace of Swords in the, I guess MLP Tarot deck.
Probably more than a few, the advantages to working with a government agency with a black budget.
Well yeah, but if you're not aware of that you could assume that its heavier than it is.
Can't really comment on this since it would require me to be familiar with G4.
No, no we would not.
I know, I couldn't resist slipping that in.
Ooh nice.
As she should, wouldn't be a Kamen Rider story otherwise now would it?
I try.
That's actually not why its called that, its actually a portmanteau of Zwei von Zauberstäben, Two of Wands. But that is kinda funny.
Heh, yeah, well she did get attacked by a monster so what does she expect?
Because ScootaBelle is so darn adorable, that's why. But yeah, its weird, is bound to happen with me though.
Yeah, we'll get into this more later, its sort of a hold-over from the original vision of this fic.
Yes, Emperor, the name Caesar should've been an indication.
I could tell you, but its more fun to make him mysterious.
Yeah, like I said they are super cute together. Usually I build up to characters being together, but this time I figured, why not?
Yeah, true, Black RX also had a car in addition to his bike too. But all the Riders in this fic use bikes.
*whistles innocently*
Funny thing is I almost had her say "Go get 'em Tiger" as a Spider-Man reference.
Yeah, Brick already said it but it is Kenzaki. Because Justice was originally envisioned as a re-write of Blade, and its influence is still visible in things like the card motif, the Driver, and something we'ell get into later, I decided why not have Blade himself make a cameo.
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Yeap, an MLP tarot deck. If you want to see the rest, here
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Can certainly have advantages
Basically, a military Rider based on G3-X that has an AI that kills it's user and uses him as a meat puppet. Not that pleasant of a guy.
Exactly!
Now I see it. Still, I Sau Zwei is kinda funny.
Wrote this before the name was uttered, that was just the nail in the coffin.
Couldn't agree more
Yeah, and it even makes a lot of sense since he is one of the few Riders who is known for leaving the country. So I can only say one thing:
"Are you really reference Nr. 1? "