A girl who loves nothing but gold. A dragon who kidnaps her by accident. A misunderstanding that's more trouble than it's worth. An opportunity to escape. Just as long as no one tries to rescue her.
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… well, her face went there
Well. Her face, HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
"I NEED MORE"
So, are the characters in this story ponies or anthropomorphic? The cover image and first chapter suggest anthro, but this chapter makes it seem like they're ponies half the time.
Don't male dragons have dual dragonhoods?
Oh no... Now come the procession of brave knights out to rescue the Princess from Despair most Distressing! Or worse yet, a group of rag-tag misfits who met at a tavern where they are given a quest by a mysterious old colt in a robe in the dark corner of the shady room, by the fireplace! Or better yet... *Dreamy harp sequence*
Brave brave Sir Button,
Bravely trot the way,
To something something... Line!
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They ran through like the tag says it's just that Blue Bloods kind of a dick okay a total dick and I'm thinking he strapped them like he would slaves
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They are anthros, but chariots are still pulled by them, and they knights are just those who have learned to be faster and so forth.. Essentially take all the ideas of the show and how the medieval style vehicles in their work, and then make all the ponies anthro.
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That depends on the writer, seeing as we don't have any real life examples to draw from.
The solution here is simple: Have Spike marry Rarity. The massive wealth and ownership of a castle (even if in ruins) and large plot of land means he is technically nobility.
Nice. Hope to see more fun chapters soon!
well written raunch.
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I'm sure Rarity would have no objections to this plan.
Also, nobility is used as an easy measuring stick by which to judge power. A dragon does not need a noble title, as they are, effectively, a nation-state.
All they need to do is tell her father that she eloped with her secret lover to avoid a terrible marriage choice, and then go about seeing how hard it is to produce kririn.
Lol well that was a funny ending for sure. I think it wont go the raunchy route right into the next chapter tho. At the moment even if Spike DID help her, there is noway she is just going to suck or jerk him off out of the blue. She is a woman who has only loved her treasure this whole time and one good deed doesn't change that. Hell I think she might punch him in the dick for it if anything. I think she will know she overreacted but wont admit it, I mean she is a spoiled princess and all. I just see the relationship being a bit slow than some people think since this is a woman who has only had one love and that 'love' is still there and is even bigger than before. So I think it will take some time for her to start to see Spike as any type of romantic partner and even then I think it would put him near her gold if not at best a semi tie with the gold still being more in the lead lol.
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That stuff is true and all my issue with it is. She just got out of a married. It would seem counter to the point is she just goes and marry something else. She want to be free to do what she want without being tied down. Her than marrying herself to something else goes right against that very ideal. I think she need to just stick to this right now and if the worse come to worse and AFTER she has spent a good bit of time with Spike getting to know him and maybe growing some sort of feelings for him I could see that fitting into the story without making all that Rarity felt and did till this moment become redundant.
Eh, not exactly...
Give it a second.
Naturally.
I'd like to see YOU design clothes for a big ass dragon.
Ah, clever dragon. He doesn't give a damn about ponies, they're FAR too much trouble. He's just interested in gold.
I like pragmatic Spike.
She isn't joking.
Yeah, I don't blame him.
You counted?
... You DO have a treasure fetish.
A fair point.
I'm inclined to agree.
Sadly no. He's yet ANOTHER one dimensional Blueblood, more a caricature than an actual pony.
And this coming from a DRAGON.
Come again?
Which is good, far too much trouble.
Which makes sense, giant fire breathing flying creatures.
Easy for you to say.
It's a DRAGON. Its scales are harder than any steel. You couldn't if you TRIED.
All right. You are not Blueblood. I am going to come up with my own backstory to justify this level of idiocy. This isn't Blueblood, this is Crazy Steve, a hobo who lives in an asylum who bumped his head and accidentally killed the real Blueblood and the trauma made him really snap and he convinced himself he's Prince Blueblood and put on his clothes.
You know, I know I called him Crazy Steve, but WOW he is mad.
Even the story itself is pointing out that Crazy Steve has no redeeming qualities. Hopefully this will serve as a reality check. I doubt it, but God I hope so.
Intimidation. It works.
Yes, because steel and fear will do SO well against a Dragon that could have wiped out you and everyone you sent in one exhalation if he so pleased. Friggin Crazy Steve.
When the supposed "beast" is capable of more empathy and kindness than the so called "civilized" being.
Well.
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It could be a false marriage, they get "officially" married, and Spike, having no real interest in Rarity and vice versa, lets her do as she pleases provided she doesn't do a stupid.
I've rarely read such a combination of comedy, insanity, and sexiness... great job!
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Medieval warfare to its finest!
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Dracarys .
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Yea I get that and all. But the issue is it still takes away from her character and the development that is now able to happen with her if that happen. This is the chance now, for her to be her own woman. To live how she want, do to what she want, without being forced to be tied to a male to have her life. Even with Spike being in her life she isn't tied to him, she isn't stuck with him. If she wanted to leave she could leave. But if she married him than she is back where she started. I just like the idea of her being strong and not feeling the need to depend on some cliche to be able to live. I want this to be the start of Rarity being strong on her own feet.
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Difference there is it would be marriage *on her own accord*, it would be *HER* choice and not forced
There is no way he's gonna keep word
Wow, the king is worse than I thought.
My favorite part XD
Is it me, or Rarity liked being compared to treasure too much?
Hhehehehe, nice.
Keep going.
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Thank you, Captain Obvious, for your words of wisdom.
Spike defends his territory, but with no lives lost on the invaders. His pacifistic nature is what makes him unique from most other dragons. His ability to change from big to small at will and his nobility in defending Rarity from her ex-fiancé with no loss of innocent lives is what makes him an incredible dragon.
If Rarity doesn't know better, despite her deep love for treasure, she may end up developing a crush on her 'kidnapper.' I'm just saying...
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What she WANTS to do is immerse herself in wealth for the rest of her life.
She was opposed to the marriage to blueblood because it would have meant less time naked on a shiny pile.
Spike's hoard is orders of magnitude larger, and unlike her previous residence she would never have to resort to elaborate tricks to steal some time with it. She would go from spending maybe a few hours a week with her treasure to spending almost all her time with it, and with so much more of it as well.
She has been quite clear about her goals.
But...... Lizards don't have external..... O.o;;