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Well, this is a good start, I look forward to the rest.
... wow okay, let's pump the breaks a bit. I have ADHD and even this was too fast for me you need to slow down the passing by an order of magnitude.
Can’t wait for next chapter and glad your back
The world needs more scootalove
I miss some good scootlove/abuse fic but the fic is moving too fast
I can't wait to see where this goes. I am sure to keep an eye on this one. I enjoyed the first one and this redux is good. You write this well. I hope there are more chapters soon. Please continue the Magiczs
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I am not sure what you are talking about. This chapter took place over a single day with the promise of at least another chapter maybe more. I think it is moving at a nice pace.
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The pacing of the story is just fine and up to the creator to decide. What matters is if you like the story or not.
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Too much information in one chapter and scootaloo already calling RD mom with little to no information on her situation. If that isn't overly fast pacing then I don't know what is. The author really needs to slow down and give more information so we can actually be invested. Seriously this first chapter starts with RD going to spend time with her mother and ends with scoots wishing RD was her mother and RD panicking with uncertainty and thinking about adopting her in all less than 2000 words. My own stories, which are considered fast paced by many, go through 1 to 3 scenes in a chapter and are around 3000 to 5000 words. Again many consider that fast this story by comparison is like traveling at mach 10. I'll say it again, the pacing is too fast and the author needs to slow down.
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I do believe the author is going off the fact that we as the reader know the relationship that these two share in the show as their background instead of needing to explain it. Though I stand by what I said that the pacing is up to the author. I was told my story was moving to fast so I understand your feelings but it is about if you like the story not how fast you think it is going.
Glad you are feeling better and congrats. All I could think of at the end of the chapter was awww, mother knows best Dashie
I see RD is more in character, which is nice.
RD’s dad’s name isn’t Bow Hot Hoof is it?
Good on SolarBolt for getting the first comment. I am happy to see how this is going. This is such a good story so far. Coco the Bearded approves with two hooves up.
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There were some Neigh Sayers before but you and I know what's up SolarBolt.
I’m following you amd I’m not getting notifs for the stories you upload.
To remedy this, I am now tracking them all.
please update, i cant wait to see what happens.
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Why do your comments get dislikes I don't get it... Also, I agree.
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Thank you for agreeing with me cccvvvttt. I am not sure if people disliked my comments because they didn't like my opinion or something else I don't know. All I do know is the you can't make everyone happy and I don't care that they didn't like my comment it doesn't hurt my feelings. As long as the authors are respected that is all I care about. I treat other stories how I expect people to treat mine, with respect. If you ever get disliked on here for a comment or a story just don't let it get to you okay.
is there more coming?
Dash adopting Scoots? Sounds good. We think alike.
When will this story be updated
Will there be more to this?
Candace:
Mom, Rainbow Dash is a wonderbolt!
Mom, Rainbow Dash is in my large intestine.
Mom, Rainbow Dash is the best flier in Equestria
Mom, Rainbow Dash built a cloud obstacle course in the backyard.
ah rainbow dash, caring for scootaloo as her own
That's too bad about the bronchitis and congratulations on getting married!