"Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old Time is still a-flying, And this same flower that smiles today, Tomorrow will be dying."
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This story is a sequel to Keep Pretending, One of Three
Trixie's most deluded fan, enfant terrible Twilight Sparkle, and the old-time romance of apple and pear. Yes! These are entries four, five, and six of Blue Chameleon VI's Writeoff Contestants for the Prompt: "Keep Pretending"
Illusion Confusion
Trixie
Comedy, Slice of Life
Crepuscula
Twilight Sparkle, Twilight Velvet
Horror, Drama
Grand Dreams, Wordsmith
Grand Pear, Granny Smith
Romance, Drama
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One of possibly the most believable childhoods I've seen depicted for Twilight.
Poor Trixie.
A masterfully unsettling portrayal of what childhood was like for Twilight, and what ordeal her parents had to go through raising a filly with such power.
What an interesting idea for how things once were between Grand Pear and Granny Smith. I enjoyed reading the notes, and I felt a good pang when I realized the exact moment that things were going to fall apart. Damn...
Superb work.
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Trixie has crazy fans, who knew?
Thanks for the read. 
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You're welcome.
I wouldn't be surprised if Twilight really did something like as a foal.
That was a good story.
The best of the trio. Quite a backfire.