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When Galbatorix was defeated, the land of Alagaesia prospered for hundreds of years after. But eventually, the world began to grow in technology, and the riders of old were no longer needed. The Urgals left for there home across the sea, their riders going with. The dwarves went farther into the Beor mountains, their riders following them to the depths of the mountains, to be lost to legend. The only ones to remain in Alagaesia, was the humans and the elves. Though, over time the elves to retreated into Du Weldenvarden, becoming the Fae folk again. Eragon had left Alagaesia, in the hands of humans. Technology prospered at the hands of humans, and eventually, the towns and cities of old where broken down, and rebuilt anew. Then, Tirek came. From a portal to another land, one inhabited by strange magics, not seen by the riders before. And so they fell. Years have passed, and Tireks tyrant reign is unbreakable. But seven girls on a field trip to the Everfree forest, will soon become something for Tirek to fear.

All things Eragon and My Little Pony belong to their respective owners, and I take credit for nothing but my story idea. I am a fan of both series, so I hope to do a good job with this story.

Help in writing this would be much appreciated, as i have a general Idea of how I want it to look, but can't get the fine details done well. Please be patient with me, as each chapter is going to be long, and few and far between, as I have to create a solid base and story. If you have comments on how it should go, or how I can fix something, they will be welcome. If you wish to help, PM me, and we can talk when available. Thank you for the help.

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So why is there no crossover tag?

I didn't know if it needed it, and it isn't exactly a crossover. It is more of a continuation of the original Inheritance series, in my own story.

You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Also, I thought Eragon was human.

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I know. I just firgot to push the button.

"After an ambush set up by a shade, or demon possessed by the spirits of the dead, one of the farriers, close to dying, tried to teleport the egg to the Varden. However, due to outside interference, the egg appeared in the middle of a small clearing before a simple farmboy. This young mans name was Eragon, and he would change the world with the dragon that hatched for him. After the dragon hatched, time obviously had to pass. The boy, not knowing dragon, the bond they now shared, raised the dragon himself, in a little town called Carvahall, which was nestled close to the edge of the Spine. The dragon grew up in the Spine, and when she was old enough, she reached out with her mind, through the bond with him to find out more. At first, Eragon was scared of the dragon, as now it was more than just a creature, it was a living thing. He went to his town storyteller, a man by the name of Brom. With his knowledge, the boy learned of the names of many a great dragon that had lived during the time of the first riders. He knew he needed to name his dragon, and telling her the many names he had learned, she chose the name Saphira. Saphira was a Royal Blue dragon, with a lighter blue on the scales of her underbelly. Her wings were like any dragons, like leather.

Shades are Men possessed by spirits. Not souls.

Pinkie is descended from Angela! I'm calling it now!

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Thank you. Any more irregularites or holes, please tell me. I want to know early, and smoothe them out quickly. Yes, I remember after having reread the book for the fifteenth time, that shades are humans possessed by Spirits, and plan to change it.

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You, my sir, have given me an idea. Thank you.

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I'm sorry I never answered the last part of this comment. I dont think I had fully read it. Yes, Eragon was human. However, during the Blood-Oath Celebration, the dragons in the cave on Doru Araeba healed Eragons back, and then turned him into an elf. After that, he mostly identified as an elf, and was mostly referred to as one.

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Um. He was referred to as neither. Sort of a half breed.

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I might have to go back, I cant remember. Thank you for the help.

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I am one of the series biggest fans. If you have any questions just ask me.

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I am too. That is why I want to get this right. For fans like us, and for others coming in. I have a direction to go, and somewhat how to get there, but if you want to help, PM me, and give me your ideas, and how you want them to be written. I want this to be good, because the inheritance cycle is awesome, and one of my all time favorite series.

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Ajihad is Eragon isn't he?

Also Rainbow Dash has elven blood. Maybe Vanir's. Both cocky, full of themselves, and positive they will win.

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I am trying to think of who would be good for Rainbows ancestors. Also, NOOOOO, Ajihad isn't ERAGON at all. I have no idea what your talking about.

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And with Elves being fast and athletic, Rainbow Dash would make a great elf. And Vanir being so boastful and cocky it just makes sense.

Comment posted by Failsafe99 deleted Dec 13th, 2019
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