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You need an editor.
Indeed
9389711
yes i do can u help me
Mice story grammar needs a little work. All in all a great story.
9572625
The first chapter is based off of your story
TBH, this story lack context on so many details. You also need a grammar/spelling editor.
9623963
i agree and it went to fast so he or she needs to take this time
well thx
When is the next update?
I'm working on it
I can get through this bad writing, because I've seen way more horrible writing then this. I'll see how better you write this. (I know I should've said type but you get the idea.)
9815784
then can you help me with my writing?
is it wrong that I want a surprise twist that he switched places with the version of him who is going ot show up for an epic face off with his counterpart later.
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Loved it.
9960955
thx
Pretty graphic description....
9966604
Ok thx
Not a bad idea, let's see what happens next.
Get an editor. Please.
10145962
do you know any
10155896
No, but it should be easy to find one.
If it wasn't for the....spelling, and the *cough* "fetishes", then I'd like this type a little better.