Wanting to know if she could have another second chance in the form of a magical do-over Sunset decided to conduct a little experiment with her friends to see if youth really is wasted on the young.
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Wanting to know if she could have another second chance in the form of a magical do-over Sunset decided to conduct a little experiment with her friends to see if youth really is wasted on the young.
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Nice start to a new story
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Thank you ^_^
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Your welcome also I came up with an idea about something that you would like to know
9764619
Awesome
Loving it already. Can't wait for more! I'm so intrigued on how this is going to go.
<3
What's the romance tag for?
It’s an okay start, but I would highly recommend that you get an editor, way too many punctuation errors.
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You'll see
9764639
Tried getting an editor. No one responds
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I love surprises I can't wait for more
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Then you're gonna love this ;D
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Yay
You got my attention!
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Booyah!
I'm kinda worried about that romance tag considering you turned Baconhair into an 8 year old.
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Friendshipping and she won't be an 8 year old the ENTIRE time.
That pic of her is adorable.
Can't wait to see what crazy hijinks ensue for her!
ok this story has my attention please update it soon
you got me hooked. although if Sunset had stayed on the good path, then she would never have come to the human world in the first place
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Perhaps...perhaps not. Destiny is a funny thing as is fate
Will be any wetting in this story?
I mean if Sunset will be a kid maybe she'll wet herself.
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Maybe maybe not. Depends
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Oh. Okay
will this update soon im still wanting more of this
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Same
Are you going to continue that story?
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yes
When's the next chapter coming it's been like 9 months since this was released
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It's on hiatus for the moment. I need help writing cause I have a bunch of unfinished work
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I see
10176772
if people DM me and follow me on discord and such getting help and therefore getting out more chapters will be easier. Working alone makes all this hard
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What do you need help with exactly?
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Editing and just the story in general
Good premise. This would actually be a good idea on Sunsets part as a way to make up and repent for her actions in the past
That's not racism, that classism and plain old-fashioned bigotry short of Sunset just hated all humans. Racism has to do with hatred of a person's perceived heritage and familial point of origin. I could say ethnicity but far too many people don't understand what that really means. Everyone has an ethnic origin short of a group not having originated from earth but then again that's an origin too. In human terms that typically equates to skin tone and other features that point to where our ancestors originated from. In the case of Equestria Girls, not only are the skin tones random pastels, AJ is the closest match to Sunset. Sunset disliked the Apple family for being farmers. Unlike Equestria, Farmer is not a race.
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Fair enough. Didn't consider that
Is this story still happening?
nice work