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The Storyteller world


What is life but a story with an infinite possible endings. Care to see where yours goes?

Comments ( 73 )

I'm just going to say that this story has me interested. The suspense of what might happen next makes me want to PM you and ask about it. Anyways, I wish you good luck and hope to see more updates in the future.

9495535
Thank you for the kind words! It's a first i've ever tried in the science side of themes instead of magic. Hope I satisfy!

Im getting a Generator Rex vibe here.

9495545
I know where you mean but it's not that though no special whips or fists from his hands.

From what i can tell getting a perfect score on the CHAOS test is so rare you would assume that they cheated.

Definitely curious to see where this story goes! Iwould also react like spike does in this, compliant and confused, then annoyed and lashing out!

9495671
Shouldn't be a cross over of anything just a idea I had.

Wow, you updated really quickly. Anyways, it was amazing to read and I hope to see more in the future.

9496853
Well luckily my job I can do from home so I have free time.

Better break out the ice packs and pain killers.

9495694
It does seem to be inspired by Generator Rex, the "Event" and E.V.O.s seem the same(replace virus with nanites)

9503174
A little in at least the beginning premise is inspired by that but there's other shows or games or sources of entertainment that helped bring ideas to this story. It is not a cross over though, Spike is not going to have robotic fists or jet bike that he can make out of his arms.

Im taking a guess here that the name of the suit Discord made is called the Dragon or Drake class.

What could POSSIBLY give you that impression?

9509057
oh i don't know the design and all the power it holds.

9509066
Nah man it's TOTALLY the new deer class.

Hopefully this Suit sounds better than the Anthem

9509099
Hey anthems not that bad I haven't ran into to many problems but yes it should be.

9509076
YEAH ok whatever you say.:ajbemused:ya darn tease

9509101



I do not know, with Discord, I would see that they were the programmers or the executors of Anthem is chaos.
Burned PC, PS4 / PS4 Pro and XBOXs

I think it will burn more >>>>> :moustache:
hahahahaha

just realized I left the purple colored letters on haha fixed it.

So will this be a spike harem story?

9509215
Not the goal. I will say he will end up in situations but i feel it would be better to make a side story that fills in those details instead of on the main one.

Jesus the one with the worst injures is AJ.

9509228
Well when all that keeps you from dying is a suit that can fail things happen. Plus ptsd from Fluttershy's side and AJ keeps going back into the suit.

It would make sense that standard A.I's can't handle all the processing power that Discords suit needs they are limit but an A'i made from a living brain can adapt to it.

i like it, i dont like the part with all the girls having some lost limbs but other then that i like it

9512420
Well figured if you want to have the effect of "This is a deadly job." Limb loss or other marks are needed. But also mind this is a future setting so there are some people who did it for an advantage.

finally a new one i was hoping to see it sooner but glad you are not abandoning the story

9590056
No none of the stories will be abandoned it’s just life’s been ramming me down at different times so I only write a small bit or even FEEL like writing. I don’t want to put trash out either just so something is out.

Oooooooooooooo.... Me likey story.

9509076
Why not make it the Dragon or Drake class? Did you think it'd be too obvious?

9590273
At this point in the story this suit is only a prototype that’s why it doesn’t have an official name like a wrecker or support or on the other classes

I love the story I hope you update soon

Ok I'm just going to start reading this and don't know what to expect, but I will see what happens :V

Just finished, and IT'S FAKING AMAZING!!!
I'll be waiting for the next chapters :D

Legitimately this story appeals to me so much it's kind of insane, the detail, the way it's written, I enjoy every bit of this story so far and cannot wait until the next chapter is released.

This is getting so amazing!!! I wonder what you have planned for the next chapter, for which, I will be waiting.

:moustache:+ Mission complete +respect

hey is E.V.O hunters a game or what

9788775
i see E.V.O the game on youtube i thought it was a game thing :rainbowhuh:

9788850
Nope just the story title I came up with. Didn’t know a game was called he same

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