Starlight's Island Adventure

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After an accident while flying in Twilight's balloon, Starlight finds herself on an uncharted island. Assuming the island to be uninhabited, she tries to sort her situation out only to discover that she isn't completely alone as a mysterious pony comes to her aid.

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WorkNLurk

WorkNLurk #1 · Mar 10th, 2019 · · ·

This was amazing! Love the concept and how much like an episode it played out (at least to me). Great work!

Marezinger Z

Marezinger Z #2 · Mar 10th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Thank you. Actually, since I knew that this wasn't going to be a longer story, I did intend to frame it narratively like an episode. Glad you enjoyed it.

mishun

mishun #3 · Mar 11th, 2019 · · ·

So, the moral is Equestrian government (at least two thirds of it) approves of assisted suicide?

Ninjadeadbeard

Ninjadeadbeard #4 · Sep 16th, 2019 · · ·

“Thank you.” He laid his cheek against the top of her head, his own tears soaking into her mane. “I’m glad I got the chance to meet you, Starlight. I just wish I could have met you a few hundred years ago.”

I mean... She IS a time traveling expert...

Good story. A bit quick and exposition heavy, but it felt like an episode of the show.

Marezinger Z

Marezinger Z #5 · Sep 16th, 2019 · · ·

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Thanks, that's what I was shooting for when I wrote this. I feel you about the exposition part, given the turn of the story it was a bit of a necessity and I can say that I've improved in that department since I wrote this. Glad you enjoyed it.