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FabulousDivaRarity
I'm a Proud ABDL mommy. Writer of padded pony fics, a lot of fics about Shining Armor and his mom, several about Rainbow Dash and her family, and far more mom stories than you can imagine.
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It's nice
I feel the story is too similar for my taste Blue Baby by The Conflicted Writer, and it's hard not to make the comparecence with. If the set up was a little different, like sending PBB to a secluded household for training or research and Mesma first as a maid while at night she slips in suggestion into his sleep and gradually falls back into foalhood for his rehabilitation with her gradually imposing herself to him or releaves him of his responsibilities to gradually gets his guard down. If he was such a jerk and stuck to begin with the staff then Celestia could have taken care of hit herself and wouldn't have jut change his tune on the first nap and not a weeks if not months long issue. Also, who is taking care of her foal while she is taking care of PBB 24/7 or if it's not the case I feel it should have been clarified that those are just sessions more?
I just feel that the plot would have needed more work.
Don't get me wrong I like the premise, but I would have liked to have had more thought put into making it stand out more on the issue.
Hum, this could work better, having PBB oscillating between him father and Mesma, this could be more interesting and would allow her not to take on the role of that bad guy in the story this time around. I wonder how this could turn out then.
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I said in the summary that Mesma was on the good side this time around. As for his father, well... Let’s just say we know who the real bad guy is here.
Right, all the downvoters must be the closed-minded types that see "diaper" fics and instantly go 4chan mode and try to downvote it away ...
So far I like the fic, and like the way Mesma is using the adult baby stuff to comfort and console. Something that actually draws folks to it in the first place. Bluwblood is being cast in a sympathetic light, I rather like it.
Cute so far keep it up.
Well progress in made now...
Finally binged through One Little Slip and I'm excited to start on this one! Read several other fics by you and I'm enjoying them all so far!
I like the story so far and I hope you upload a new chapter soon. Because I'm very interested to know what happens next with Prince Blueblood and if he will ever recover after what his father did to him as a child.