(Pony Creator created the pony, I did the rest)
I’ve sold out stadiums, shows, and albums. However, nopony really knows me. This stallion hiding behind shadows is nothing like they think I am. On-stage I act boisterous, prideful, and enthusiastic, however, the stallion isn’t always the mask.
In this case, I’m nothing like the mask. I’m Compact Disc, honestly, I’m just a shadow of a pony.
(Written in the first person (in case you couldn’t tell))
I like where you are going so far, though I do recommend you getting a proof reader to go back and help you fix the nit picky mistakes you didn't notice.
Otherwise I like the basis and I will be tracking this story for now.
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I just make it readable without getting comments correcting my grammar, but I’ll fix the choppy sentences which is the main issue I note here.
The Man behind the work?
is this a hie?
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I’ll fix it...
No, it’s not an HiE, just an accident.
Is this still alive?
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Yes, I was just going to update it after StallionForce.
Except I’m too lazy to listen to my favorite band, apparently .
I could update it rather soon though, presuming I get an idea on how to further it.