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Dashie04


Your friendly neighborhood writer of entirely too many trans ponies! (Dashie | she/her | Discord: velvetred2004 | pfp by Malphym)

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(Pony Creator created the pony, I did the rest)

I’ve sold out stadiums, shows, and albums. However, nopony really knows me. This stallion hiding behind shadows is nothing like they think I am. On-stage I act boisterous, prideful, and enthusiastic, however, the stallion isn’t always the mask.

In this case, I’m nothing like the mask. I’m Compact Disc, honestly, I’m just a shadow of a pony.

(Written in the first person (in case you couldn’t tell))

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

I like where you are going so far, though I do recommend you getting a proof reader to go back and help you fix the nit picky mistakes you didn't notice.

Otherwise I like the basis and I will be tracking this story for now.

9543603
I just make it readable without getting comments correcting my grammar, but I’ll fix the choppy sentences which is the main issue I note here.

The Man behind the work?
is this a hie?

9544304
I’ll fix it...

No, it’s not an HiE, just an accident.

9567050
Yes, I was just going to update it after StallionForce.

Except I’m too lazy to listen to my favorite band, apparently :twilightsheepish:.

I could update it rather soon though, presuming I get an idea on how to further it.

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