• Member Since 6th Feb, 2015
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SC_Orion


Just an introvert who likes My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I also like to write MLP fanfiction. Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony.

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With Celestia and Luna having finally retired and passed on the throne to Twilight, the weight of Equestria has fallen on Twilight's back, and without her friends there by her side, doubts and fears haunt her, leaving her restless and anxious.

But maybe all she needs is a friend to be there with her and tell her it will be alright.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

i shall be very cross with you if you do not continue this in a romance story between them!

I almost passed this up. And I'm glad I didn't.
Thanks for this story, it was really well done and I did feel the emotion put into it. It felt ... alive.
Sorry, I don't know the best word to describe what I'm feeling.
Thanks again.

Will there be a sequel?

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Well thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed my work!


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I won't rule out a sequel, but as of right now it's not planned. If I do write a sequel it might be a bit. My life is rather hectic right now and I have other priorities. Hope you understand!

Wunderbar!

Don't worry, Twilight, I don't think Dash will mind helping you by cuddling you.

I hope there's a follow up to this.
You know with a .. Romance angle in mind. ;)
TwiDash for the Win.:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

Good story and very sweet. Wish there was more of it, but I wish that about most of the stories I read on this site. Especially the Twidash, so nothing new there. Would love to see a sequel but I can be patient about it.

Seriously, this was well done and is sticking with me today.
I usually avoid romance stories for many reasons but this was done right. Lots of heart in this. Whether or not you choose to continue. Thank you again.

This was a good read. Well written if a bit light on the romance side.

Twidaaaaash! Imma gonna read it right away!

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I did consider having a scene with them dreaming (and it would have had more romance to it), but I ended up deciding against it because I felt like it was at a good point to stop (and that writing more would detract from the story). I'm not that great when it comes to writing endings; I need to practice more.

Pinkie would do a great job running the country.

  • Pinkie has stashes of items stored for emergency purposes, showing that she plans for emergencies.
  • She makes massive cakes super fast, something that can't be done without lots of planning and efficiency (and a little Pinkieness doesn't hurt).
  • She's super popular.
  • And, to top it all off, her randomness makes it incredibly difficult for her political enemies to get anything over her.

Now I really want to read a story where Pinkie rules Equestria, and her enemies try to bring her down, but fail hilariously.

This story hit home pretty hard for me when I read it. Yesterday I had full on panic attack. No idea what triggered it, I just know that it had been slowly building up to that point. Luckily when it hit, my husband had just gotten home from work and was able to calm me down. I very much enjoyed this story.

Ack the feels :fluttercry:

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