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Gallus wouldn't trade the world for his friends. Whether it be Smolder's competitive attitude, Silverstream's excitement, or Sandbar's calm demeanor, they're the best friends a griffon could have. Then one day, while Starlight is sick, a(n accidentally) spell causes Gallus to gets sucked into a portal. Now he's in a world like his own, but under control by an infamous king.
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Pretty good.
Somewhat of an underrated gem in my opinion.
I'm surprised your story didn't get enough attention here This Is an awesome story and I like how gallus How to get through this whole ordeal to get home but also helping This au I will love to see something like this Again how they been doing after the Defeat of the storm king
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Maybe we can see them again in a special story. Like on my fiftieth story or if I get a certain amount of followers. The story would be good for a special occasion.
Boy gallus Is gonna have a hack of a time to get home and man this au is very dark
For what the tree warning Gallas that He doesn't belong here Which that's a problematic for him and poor Ocellus She was so in pain when she was hungry that's horrible what happened what they did to them Specially the way how they did with Traders It was so Brutal but man rainbow dash I know she's upset but some of the words that she said is just really unnecessarily I know she's trying but what she's doing is bad And hopefully Help her But I'm glad that that Ocellus join Gallas and sandbar To help them to defeat the storm king
Ocellus saw Smolder and Yona flying above. Without warning, they landed on the ground, superhero style.
Nice reference to deadpool 👍 lol
boy A lot of things just happen at once 1st of all the other 3 on a way to the crystal Empire While the other 3 pursuing them as well but Gallus is having problems Something from the inside is killing him I wonder what's going on with him and Silverstream my god The way she told us about what happened to her and queen nova is just horrible to hear i felt bad for her But now she's in the side of the others now And the return of shadow Tempest But now she got vaught and the others had to make a run for it So far they got away from the general and now yona join Gallas team But now they're being kidnapped by the formal wonderbolts dang things got crazy and epic this story is pretty awesome.
Once they were each free, she held Spitfire down while the griffon walked over to the panicking hippogriff. She was sweating in fear as she started tearing up. Not knowing what to do, Gallus just hugged her.
"G... Gallus?" Silverstream stuttered.
"Just calm down and take the hug." The hippogriff cheered up a little bit as she hugged him back.
Awww gallus and Silverstream 😍😭
"They're going to find us," Silverstream cried with Gallus covering her beak. They stayed quiet and hoped that the wouldn't be found, but they were. Soarin found them and could see the fear on their faces.
"Soarin, what's taking so long?" questioned the stallion.
The former Wonderbolt looked towards the creatures then shouted back at the stallion. "They're not in here!"
"Then search somewhere else."
The pegasus looked at the group. "Get out of here while you can." With that, he walked out of the station and the group waited until the cost was clear.
Out the rest of the wonderbolts soarin was The only one he believe them which is awesome of him
Suddenly, Gallus started putting things together. "Okay, this may sound crazy, but I've been getting these chest pains every time I woke up in this world. Now, I think we share each other's pain." To confirm this, Gallus bit his wing, making him wince a bit but the general cried out.
"How?"
"You think I wanted this? I've just been trying to get home."
"Great, now I have something else to worry about. Alright, scouts, look for the..." He couldn't finish his sentence as his doubleganger banged his head against the cage bars. "Stop that."
"Oh, what are you going to do, torture me? You'll only hurt yourself. Plus, I think the king wants me dead." The general's eyes widened. "Oh, that's going to hurt you too."
Ohh Looks like Gallas Struck a nerve on the general Gallus Not always that they share those same pain if one dies the other 1 will die with him wow
"Nope. Go ahead, give us another shock and a burn."
"You're enjoying this, aren't you?"
"A bit." Gallus gave a sassy grin as the general growled.
Lol oh gallus you t's lol
"I know," Gallus said with a smirk on his face. "You may have a lot of things, an army, a kingdom, and the magic of four alicorns. You could have all the power in Equestria, but you wouldn't even come close to the most powerful magic of all. Honest, Kindness, Laughter, Generosity, Loyalty, and Magic. These six elements come together to make the Magic of Friendship."
Heck yeah gallus You represent the team leader of the Elements of harmonies
Getting chained up by the Used to be the wonder bolts Then a fight with smolder then Gallas got kidnapped The rest finally got into the castle to rescue Gallus and still the staff from the king storm Then having the epic battle thinking almost there are going to lose the Magic of friendship prevails once again Now the world needs to be healed after that storm king did It's gonna be a very slow process But they will get there and the brighter future thanks to gallus hes the hero of this au.
"Yeah, I thought it was clever too. Anyways, the rest of you were part of the Storm King's army. Ocellus was a spy, Smolder was a combatant, Yona was just for destruction, and Silverstream was a scout."
Kind of reminds me of that game called team fortress 2 when you calling out those class I just realized that
Whoa The story is pretty intense and gallus is in the alternate universe where the storm king wins very interesting
Well I’m glad that gallus and sandbar knows how to make Ocellus feel better here despite that she’s been captured and I really felt bad for the main 5 Because they lost their friend hopefully these kids will find a way to stop him
Holy crap there's a lot of happening going on in this story so Gallus Ocellus and Sandbar are on the journey and it looks like they pick up two of their supposably they're friends Silversterm and Yona and the general is getting desperate to capture them especially Smolder this is some exciting stuff man
Man that has one hell of a journey for Gallus to go through this alternate universe had to fight for his life but yet somehow making friends along the way and basically helping himself literally I'll give him this he is pretty cool
Yo that was a pretty epic story here and man Gallus need a lot of rest after all he been through to get to his timeline it will be very interesting to see this again but awesome story dude
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