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Krail
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Krail
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I say about time someone made a story about this art
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Can't agree more with you.
10590014
Mhm
10590018
i still hope for a happy...ish..ending for this, with cabalaron a corpse and RD being scoots new misstress...the little broken filly no good for anything other then sex anymore and maybe RD has some secret desires of her own, asuming the story follows the story exactly (rd 'did' survive in the pic series, though DD did not, and shes been persuing doc ever since, but he keeps giving her the slip and torturing her with scootaloo's state)
10590190
You're telling me
Definitely needs some kinda happy ending for Dash and Scoots
I noticed a bit of divide and wanted to clear the air a bit.
This is simply an unapologetic dark power trip story. Whether you like immersing yourself in the submissive Scootaloo or the conniving Caballeron side of things.
There's plenty of feel good stories involving these characters elsewhere if it's not your cup of tea. I'll be focusing on a villianous ending for this one. It has the dark and tragedy tags for a reason.
Oh wow, a story that mentions Scootaloo's parents. Most of them just have her as an orphan.
Given the tags, I guess it worked completely as intended with no problems whatsoever.
Now I'm really curious of Scootaloo's journey. Nice twist.
10590504
I like this story so far. I hope the downvotes won't stop you from continuing it.
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10590236
Here is the happy endingng you want:
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Should RD indeed survvive, maybe she could be scoots best mare at their wedding.
10590923
Or have Daring and Rainbow mind broken with Scootaloo, but I'm still fine if only Scootaloo lives as long as this gets completed.
Oh boy. Cabby, don't do it or you'll be sent to the special part of Tartarus with all the other foal fiddlers.
At least he was gentle
I hope Cabby gets strung up by his nuts. Scoots is going to need a lot of therapy and counseling.
10590504
Do you think there'd someday be like an alternate version with a happy (or at least bittersweet, leaning more towards sweet) ending or something?
I'd understand if not, but I just figured I'd ask just in case, since I'm the kind of person who prefers happy endings, or at least bad endings that SEEM happy for the characters involved, unless the story involves straight mind control, or the story is something like the "A Dash of Ego Series" (since Dash is my favorite character of the mane 6)
10594902
I don't really want to go back on my word but I did have an idea for one. I might add bonus epilogue chapter after the villianous ending but haven't decided yet.
10594951
Alright.
Love this fic and the art so much, just realized I can add this to my new group
10595763
Thank you! Glad you like my stuff.
I don't know WHY I checked out the latest chapter, despite KNOWING that, at least for now, there's no way this is going to have a happy ending, but curiosity overwhelmed me, and now I feel like I'm going to need to read the remaining chapters when they come out just to see how bad things end up really getting.
Y'all can have different opinions but there's one thing I think we can all be glad about.
We're finally off all of these damn trains.
10591558
Multiple atempts of murder, grand theft, greed, avarice... He was on his way to Tartarus before this.
Abduction? Check! Traumatizing the hostage? Check! An overly complicated scheme? Check! All Cabby needs to do now is pontificate and gloat to Rainbow Dash and Daring Do on how he is superior to them in every way.
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At the moment, the upvotes are double the downvotes.
It begins to look really good now.
Why are fics about Stockholm syndrome so rare? I hope you write more of this concept after this.
I feel pretty much the same about this chapter as the last one, except even more so (I'll try not to repeat myself the next time)
10649381
That rule only aplies to humamized or anthro minors, not to ponies.
Foalcon is very comon here and even I wrote some foalcon. It may not have turnef out well, but there are enough enough other foalcon stories to enjoy.
10649405
Well, now you know. I wish you good luck with that. I quit writing porn because I am not very good at it and while futa sounds intresting, I definitly won't look into that anthro story.
Man, that's worse than I was expecting for their fates
10649411
You seem like a good writer. Write whatever you feel like! That's the beauty of it.
Nice. They're finally dead.
10649631
I'll do just that, even if it's hard, but I won't surrender in front of such a challange.
10658584
Good luck. I hope you don't get burned out.
Scoots is going to need some serious therapy and Cabby needs to be hanged until he is half-dead, have all four legs broken, be completely de-sexed with a rusty butter knife, have his guts slowly pulled out with a hook that just has the tip heated until it's glowing and when he finally dies, his body gets chopped into equal pieces, his head must be prominently displayed on the gates of Canterlot, all four legs sent to be displayed at the four corners of Equestria, half of his body hanged from the gate of his home town, the other half suspended from the pinnacle of Cloudsdale and his genitals eaten by hogs.
10678289
Happy to give you something to hate.
Man, I hope Rainbow gets broken too.
10679109
I recommend "The Noncon Anthology: Part 2" here on fimfiction. I just got finished reading it and thats seems better suited if you want to see Rainbow broken.
10680199
I'll read it the next time I need something then, thanks for sharing!
I actually wouldn't be opposed to reading a Scootaloo x Caballeron fic where they form a genuine romance (even though I tend to ship Caballeron with Daring), as opposed to the love potion + mind break + stepfordization stuff in this one.
so wait is Daring dead?
Glad to see that Dash is physically alright. I know I was spoiled on that earlier, but it's still glad to see.
Still have no idea where this is all going now, but as I've said before, I'm too morbidly invested to stop following.
And I guess from this point on, at least Scootaloo will have a semi-happy ending, even though the journey so far for her has largely been not.