A brony who quickly writes whatever comes to mind, then posts it (sometimes not even proofreading) I really should consider not doing that.
Equestria is a land full of mysteries that can not be rationally explained. Each one falling somewhere between the balance of good and evil.
For young Spike, a close brush with one such mystery opened his eyes to that which many ponies never see. Now with the aid of Zecora, he'll delve into this side of Equestria in order to save his friends.
His journey starts one day, when he spots a certain unicorn standing in the middle of the road.
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Makes me wonder if Canterlot has any crystalline dragon sculptures lying around. And wow... I just loved this story.
I should probably mention that a couple of sentences seemed to be run-ons. Other than that I am in awe. This is probably my new favorite romance fic.
Nicely done, and that ending, I laughed. Are the rest of the chapters going to be a series of stand alone shorts surrounding supernatural events, or are they all going to be focused on Spike discovering the mysteries Equestria hides?
You have some tense issues with switching between past and present.
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Crap, I do? (regarding the tense issue) I'll look over it again to find those errors as soon as I can. God I wish Google docs and Office would catch those kinds of things.
Regarding the direction of the story, it will follow Spike discovering something plaguing each of his friends (the mane 6) and with Zecora's assistance, save them.
Each chapter will play out like stand alone, with Spike being the main character and one of the other girls being the one needing help.
1122008 Word does on the occasion. Usually it's a blue line, but only if the tense issue is in the same sentence, not a new one.
Sounds pretty awesome. I would like to see some advancement between Rarity and Spike though, perhaps as background information.
Something original: Makes me wanna comment!
First chapter with one of my favorite couples in the show! Kudos for that
Anyways, I really liked the concept, even thought it took me quite a while to understand what was happening. It drew me away from whatever I was doing to figure it out, which is good!
Making this a series only wants me to have more, even though if there are gonna be different characters tossed into it! I like fics where it requires you to knack your brain, so this is gonna be under my nose for awhile!
In the meantime, keep doing what you do!
I wish I felt like reading so I could read your awesome stories, but alas.
However, I will point out an error in the descripion. "fmysteries".
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Thanks. No matter how many times I look over stuff, something manages to slip through.
At least the flaws aren't large enough that they're discouraging people from reading.
Or are they and no one is saying? Well good or bad criticism aside I'll take em with humility and insanity and I'll scribble onward.
I.LOVED.IT
thanks for bringing more of the Sparity elixir into my life!
looking forward for the other stories : )
and i hope you could write more about "their" story, although this is your story so don't wanna bother you.
Pretty good job
WTF! All again.
Well crap, looks like the best thing to do is to find the mirror and go from there.
"Nope." - Zecora, the art of trolling.
What the vanishing pie?!!?!?
Maybe the princesses have an answer.
So, I guess, the only way to stop this, is to find that mirro-
OH, MY GOOOOOOD WHAT IF ONE OF HER SISTERS FOUND THE MIRROR?!?!?!
RUN BACK! RUN BACK TO THE FARM NOW!!!
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... Too much?
This is basically the first two episodes of Bakemonogatari condensed into Sparity form.
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Pretty much for the first 2 chapters.
I essentially did it as a springboard and planned out the next chapters to have a more original story per each character, but I've just have not gotten around to it.