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FoxMcCloud7921


Not much to say except that I love video games, my favorite series being Star Fox and Mass Effect; reading, sports, etc. I have a separate FanFiction account where more of my stories can be found.

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It's been ten years since Princess Twilight Sparkle and her friends took the roles of leaders of Equestria, saving the land from the Windigoes and possible civil war. While it hasn't been perfect, Twilight and the others have been able to maintain the Golden Era of Peace. However, when a specter from the past returns for revenge, Twilight will be put to the test if she, as leader, can protect her home. But will the magic of friendship be enough to win this time?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 34 )

I'm going to see where this goes.

I’m hooked!

The end of the show really shook me up. I'm just glad to see the fan fiction continue. It gives me hope to believe that our beloved ponies will always be having adventures here.

Also, great story!

loving this satory, keep up the great work

This story isn’t half bad.
It does feel like another adventure, just set years in the future, hope we have more of that aspect planted in the story

“Nah, I don’t think you will,” Starlight assured her. “But that does remind me of something I wanted to ask your opinion about: what if we decided to appoint Sandbar, Yona, Ocellus, Gallus, Smolder, and Silverstream as our new friendship tutors?”

The problem here is the fact that Gallus is part of the royal guard.

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Ah, don’t forget this is before the finale. Like way before.

Apple Strudel is a male pony, not a female.

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I legit forgot he was an actual character. :rainbowderp:

i noticed at the beginning of this chapter, sunset said "she had to focus on this Helmet of Mangalarga" but after that you switched her target to the spear?

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Yeah that’s an error I’ll fix that.

I think as I wrote this I was gonna have Vanhoover be the location of the helmet but for some reason I changed it.

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No worries. Any chance we could get a list of who is in each of the three groups?

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But that’ll spoil the surprise... :duck:

Okay, so Ocellus was the ursa minor. Who was the bugbear?

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He’s “Changeling No. 1”. :twilightsheepish:

I really hope The story continues

THE PONY OF SHADOWS IS BACK!!!!
Equestria is FUCKEDD!!!

Years have passed since that fateful day in the well and Hollow Shades was as quiet as ever. However, as anyone who has lost someone has always been told, “No one’s ever really gone.”

Ohhhh spooky that means he's coming back

Not bad of a starts of the story this is pretty interesting so far so that means the shadow Pony has returned I wonder what's going to happen

So this is 10 years between the coronation and the last problem very cool so Twilight and Spike are preparing for a celebration of some sort and not only that they still want to repair the castle of the Two Sisters which that's pretty cool but it looks like there's some trouble Applejack looks like something is wrong I wonder what could it be

So apparently something's going on at the Hollow Shades some of the ponies are acting weird talking to them self and even going violent to each other so Twilight has to do something but she needs help of her friends Starlight and Trixie are just hanging out at the school of friendship and looks like Starlight got the note from Twilight that she needs her help meanwhile Rainbow Dash and the other Wonderbolts are practicing after that practice Spitfire wanted to talk to rainbow dash privately and she made the announcement that she's going to retire within three months and she wanted Rainbow Dash to become the leader of the Wonderbolts which that's one of the biggest honored that she ever gotten but it looks like she also got the mail as well from Twilight I wonder what's going to happen next

Oh boy something tells me this cannot be good so Rainbow dash Starlight and Applejack made it to Hollow Shades but apparently the town is empty there's nobody there except for Applejack's cousin they told them about what's going on and why the ponies are acting so strange so they check the well to see if there's anything bad down there but apparently there was some dark magic down there and whatever it is it's taking effect on the three ponies but they Escape but unfortunately they found possessed Ponies and attacking them so Rainbow dash has to warn Twilight about what's going on hopefully Applejack and starlight can hold them off before the others gets there

Oh boy things to not look good so rainbow dash made it to Canterlot she told Twilight about what happened but it looks like Discord heard everything and even summon the other ponies to be here so now everybody was there they made it to Hollow Shades but unfortunately things will quiet and Applejack and starlight are missing but they hurt they said they went to the well and the Mysterious Pony with a mask was going to summon the Pony of shadow and now he has returned so the situation from bad to worst

It was Twilight’s turn to smile. “Everyone.”

Like Super Smash Brothers ultimate everyone's here sort of but hey awesome

Well it looks like everything is on the go Twilight is trying to get any information about this cult and Pony of shadow but it looks like Princess Celestia and Luna are also helping out the situation as well trying to get about some information and it's time to get everybody involved even Sunset Shimmer is helping out as well so Twilight told everybody about the situation of the return of pony of Shadow and an evil cult have risen once again to find the artifacts and bring it to him so they have to spread out across Equestria to find them and stop them hopefully things will go well for all of them

Alright so Sunset is with fizzlepop moondancer minuet Derpy glida and some of the Wonder bolts and the unicorns trying to get the spear before the cult get to it they look like they're about to have an easy time until they showed up now it looks like they're going to have to fight the way out hopefully everybody will be okay

“The Amulet?” Quarriere asked, her eyes widening. “Oh dear…you must know how dangerous this amulet is.”

“Oh we’re aware…” Trixie muttered.

Oh yeah Trixie knows the danger of that amulet yikes

So Starlight is with maud Trixie Mudbriar sunburst silverstream gallus Ocellus and apparently an unknown Changeling with her so the group are heading for mainhattan but apparently the cult was waiting for them but it looks like they got a drop on them as well so Trixie has to use the Alicorn Magic to level the battlefield well that should be very interesting I really do hope this story does continue this is a very interesting and very exciting

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