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Super Trampoline


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Luster Dawn has an incredibly weird dream. I think. I... I'm honestly not sure what's going on here. Something. That's for sure.

Here are the people who did most of the work concocting this monstrocity:

Add your name here if you’re adding to this:
(Super Tramp)oline ha ha funny I edited his name so it looks like his name is super tramp xDDDD
TheMajorTechie (TONKUS takes no responsibility for anything that is mentioned here. Ever. ‘Cause holy heck. Also kinda flooded the story near the end with something a little more logical before it broke down and was flushed away like toilet paper or something again)
_Moonshot (regret)
Noodling Commodore [ I’m not sure who this is]
Cereal-Killer
WhatDidIJustRead
Bobbakeran69 author of bast bins
Stand Master: Wonder
Odina Rose (I already regret this.) (Actually never mind. I regret nothing.)
Zapper Frost (I'm already loving this)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 27 )

Lunchtime Luster...

Is her father Lack Luster?

I'll be honest. When I saw this I thought it was Luster Dawn's Incredibly Weird Orgasm.

The real title is actually... slightly disappointing. :fluttershysad:

Well that's about twenty minutes of my life I'll never get back... Thank you.

Now if you excuse me, it's off to hell for me!

Hi-ho, Hi-ho-- Off to hell I go!

With a pitchfork here and a fire there!

Hi-ho, Hi-ho, Hi-ho!!

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I can’t believe I forgot to link to one of my favorite stories on this site with one of my favorite OCs of all time. Thank you for inadvertently pointing that out. Check the chapter again.

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UM........ OK

Regretti spaghetti

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I'm not gonna say I called it... but I called it :trixieshiftright:

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I did and you tricked me into reading a story about a Lunch Pone.

You diabolical bastid.

Or probably more of a hungry one?

How the heck is this rated well? We literally just poured liquid garbage into a Gdoc. :rainbowlaugh:

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It... it’s in the feature box right now. What the actual fuck?!?

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Deep down inside everybody yearns for Liquid Garbage...

Just nobody admits it.

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Her mild inconvenience of Equestria was pretty funny.

This story is the most valid argument both for and against Fimfiction's moderation I've ever seen. I have to wonder what the mods response to seeing a Super Trampoline fic lined up to approve is.

Huh. I didn't expect a late return to relative coherence, but that actually turned out rather... Not well, but certainly less "raw Google Docs dump" than the opening. That framing device certainly works. Goodness knows I've had dreams that flow like this.

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That framing device certainly works.

Yeah, I was like, “hmmm, how can I not spend four hours slash and burning this into something coherent? Oh, I know!”

Why has nobody told me that this has been posted?

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You should follow me so you know when these things are published in the future!

*lip smack lip smack Lip smack* *Small pause* *lip smack lip smack lip smack* moist

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