The Milf Six

MA Milf Six Side Story-Care to join us?
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Twilight Velvet stops by Posey Shy and Gentle Breeze's house for information relating to a book she's writing. However, when she arrives she sees Gentle Breeze with somepony else: Windy Whistles.
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Twilight Velvet
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MA Milf Six Side Story: Stair Sex For Luck
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Cookie Crumbles arrives at the home of Night Light and Twilight Velvet, only to find Night Light vaccuming the stairs in his underwear. So she decides to have a quicke with him.
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Gekiviolet

Gekiviolet #1 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

As soon as I read that 2nd paragraph, I knew it was based off that Robot Chicken (Golden Girls) sketch.

Mirror Star

Mirror Star #2 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

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I'm glad you noticed that. Anyone with a trained eye and robot chicken knowledge would know what that means.

nightstalker616

nightstalker616 #3 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

that was good

Zeebra Monger

Zeebra Monger #4 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

*heating poopcorn and looking at the zepeling do down into flames* Nice......very nice >3

SNES4ever

SNES4ever #5 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

I know it won’t happen but I would love to read about them having a wedding dress themed orgy night swinger party with their husbands.

Mirror Star

Mirror Star #6 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

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You never know. I might do something like that one day. Can't promise anything mind you but it is possible.

Herald of Opera

Herald of Opera #7 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

A reminder that Pear Butter being alive requires the AU tag. (The other stuff can potentially fall into headcanon)

Shakespearicles

Shakespearicles #8 · Feb 6th, 2020 · · ·

We share a lot fo things and have been through a lot together;

laofuzi

laofuzi #9 · Feb 6th, 2020 · 1 · 2 ·

I flew down to Everfree park for my Saturday morning jog. While I was jogging, I ran into Hondo, who was also jogging. We decided to have a race to the ruins of the Castle of the Two Sisters; winner would get any reward from the loser. The run was long but Hondo managed to win by a mustache.

He'd used steroids to win that race against that lemon-chested peggy!

"If I'm being honest, I wish he had cummed inside of my pussy but Hondo wasn't sure if I was on the pill; I didn't think I was either. But at least I got to lick his cum off of me."

WW: Best cum tasting EVER!!

"Couldn't you have waited for a more apporpriate place to have sex other than the ruins of Celestia and Luna?"

It's not like this place is haunted by dark souls from tragic victims!

It was during that love scene where my sexual inabitions took over and I kissed Bright Macintosh. I unbuttoned his shirt to examine his muscular body and I licked his pecks for a bit too. While we had the theater to ourselves, we did not strip compltely naked. However, I unzipped his pants, pulled down my skirt and panties, and placed my pussy on top of Bright Mac's already hard penis. His large penis inside of my pussy was incredible;even if he couldn't give me the proper amount of thrust like he wanted since we had to be quite during the movie. Plus, Bright Mac's kisses on my neck and his touches on my sides and underneath my breast were more than pleasurable for me; especially when we were watching the love scene. Unfortunatley, I noticed an usher's flashlight coming in and Bright Macintosh and I had to stop and make ourselves look presentable; apparantley, a somepony was sneaking into movies he didn't pay for.

You two should be lucky you both didn't got registered as sex offenders and/or be sent to prison for a couple of years!

Cloudy said after eating sugar cookie "It wasn't worth the risk. I heard that a young couple did that and were banned from the movie theater for life..."

Don't forget the sex offender registry part!

At the same time, he grabbed the shower head to spray us both with water over our heads and I grabbed the soap bar with my wings so the soap and water to flow on our bodies.

Don't drop the soap!

Pear Butter said "At the very least, I know I like doing roleplaying with Gentle Breeze the most. In fact, my story was pretty "breast fetishy" when it came to the two of us

What can I say? Gentle Breeze's wife does have the biggest rack among you milf six!

"I love getting my breast played with too. Why didn't he ask me to be the fantasy mare for that? Cookie said in a pouty voice.

You're a bit too old for his tastes, I think

Mine was a roleplay scenario too. Night Light was a police officer and I was a cat burglar that he's been chasing for years.

More like a cougar burglar!

"You're a criminal and I'm an officer of the law. I get to do whatever I want with you. Making your weak from my dick of justice is part of that service. He had full control over me this entire time and made me orgasm a total of eight times before I ran out of fluids."

Have a taste of eight-inches of Equestrian Justice, you rapist burglar!

5. Sucking on his dick while using magic to twist his nipples. 4. Using actual pegasus feathers from Bow to tickle his feet, chest, and thighs. 3. Getting fucked in my asshole while having lit candles surrounding us; some of the wax getting poured on Bow's chest. 2. Paddling Bow with a plank and whipping him with a riding croque and whip at the same time while I sucked on his balls. 1. Inserting a vibrator dick inside of his asshole and watching as he reacts to having it inside of him

What, no safe word?!!

"I'm just going to leave some money here." The pony that has been listening to all their sex stories said before leaving the table.

They're not hookers, in case you were wondering!!

Orphan

Orphan #10 · Feb 7th, 2020 · · ·

10071323
Same with Bright Mac

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #11 · May 27th, 2020 · · ·

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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It's a nice gimmick to have a bunch of different first-person accounts.
-The different text colors are interesting ... but also sometimes annoying and sometimes hard to read, depending on Fimfic's light or dark background. They grey text is hard to read on dark Fimfic, and the yellow text is hard to read on light Fimfic. When you use colored text -- especially when you use a lot of it -- you want to make sure it's easily visible on both backgrounds.
-lot fo things -- of.
-a historical figurer -- figure.
-it ok for us -- either 'okay' or 'OK'.
-we had to be quite during the movie -- quiet.
-licked his pecks -- pecs. It's short for pectorals.
-Cookie said "Once Hondo gets you -- needs a comma.
-Windy Whistles' story sounds like it was told by a teenager, not a milf.
-No idea who's saying what during certain parts.
-On the nose dialog.
-Sex scenes are too short and summarized to be effective.
-Barely any details.
-Poor grammar and lack of details just kills this clopfic.
-Could be a really great fic with some editing and some expansion of the brief sex scenes into full scenes ... maybe even full chapters.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 20/100
Allure: 5/100
Enticement: 30/100
Immersion: 10/100
Prose Quality: 30/100
Total Score: 95/500
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