Now I know what you’re thinking. Sandbar is a pony just like me, and I can’t possibly bring myself to ever take revenge on a fellow pony, can I? Well, you’re wrong! Sandbar is the worst of the lot, because he’s a pony like me and should have done everything I said but instead he chose to side with his dumb friends! If it wasn’t for him they’d have all been locked in their room and never would have stopped me! It’s basically his fault that I’m even in this dumb cave and taking orders from an old goat.
So he’ll be the next one into the throne room. The first thing he’ll see is Silverstream in her fish bowl up in the ceiling, stuck up there and forced to watch as my next victim is brought in by my Cozy Guard – oh, hang on, I’ve got the uniform designs for them all picked out! What do you think?
I don’t see the point of uniforms.
I don’t see the point of minions.
Well, fine, but you have to admit that the bows will really help sell the whole outfit. Speaking of bows, the Cozy Guard will bring him in and put him in front of my throne. He’ll be all dejected and defeated just like Silverstream, but Silverstream never shuts up but Sandbar is more likely to just clam up like the turtles he’s got on his flank. I won’t even need to break his spirit, it’ll already be broken! And that’s when I’ll put my plan in action!
He’s going to be my maid!
…okay but why, though?
Heeheehee, you’ll love this. See, Sandbar doesn’t just attend the school, he actually lives in Ponyville, his mother and father and little sister all live there. I can get to his family so easily, once I’m ruling my own slice of Equestria! So I’ll have his family hostage, his mom and dad and little sister, and if Sandbar doesn’t do everything I say then I’ll take it out on them! Oh, and his mom and dad will also be my maids, and Coral – that’s his sister, she’s just a little filly, like a yearling, I think – can be my little friend!
Okay, I understand that…what I’m not understanding is why he’s your maid, or why you want him as your maid. And why that’s a good form of revenge. This hippogriff mare gets stuck in a fishbowl for the rest of her life, but you let the pony just wander around almost freely cleaning up after your messes?
You’re not thinking long-term, Chrysalis! I mentioned Coral, didn’t I? I’m going to be her very best friend! She’s just a little filly and doesn’t know anything yet, but she’ll be by my side! I’ll heap all sorts of praise on her and I’ll play games with her, and make sure that she is trained in all sorts of martial arts so that she becomes a ninja –
Wait, what?
And Sandbar will only be able to watch as I turn his little sister into my most loyal and trusted minion!
What’s a ninja?
It’s a kind of spice.
That’s ginger.
Is it? My mistake.
How do you not know that?
I told you I wasn’t much of a cook –
A “ninja” is what Coral will be! She’ll take out my enemies and sabotage my foes! I read about them in this Power Ponies comic, they were fighting ninjas belonging to the Hoof clan. But in any event, you see what I’m going for, right? Making Sandbar’s little sister into my trusted minion will be the worst pain I could inflict upon him! Mwuhahahahahahaha!
What if her loyalty to her brother is stronger than her loyalty to you and she turns on you?
My personal experience is the opposite.
…moving on!
Well, at least Cozy is making good use out of her future prisinor in this case. The addition of Sandbar's little sister is a surprisingly amusing and sinister idea.
Something tells me she just wants to see a cute boy in a maid costume.
PFFFFFFHAHAHAHAHAHA
I LOVE the idea that Cozy has all these nerdy interests deep down!
Another amazing chapter
Also, Cozy wants to see a teenaged stallion in a maid costume? That's a little lewd for her!
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Yep, Cozy's a little lewd
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I may end up repeating this for every chapter...
Does Cozy have a crush?
The Hoof Clan. Do they battle alligators trained by a mutated hamster?
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No, no, they're Gila monsters raised by a chinchilla.
Ouch there, Tirek.
yeah, those two know all about family turning on you. Wonder if Cozy does at well?
Ok cozy needs help on these plans like before booting her down the stairs or before being brought to cozy she decided to give her sushi one last time only to reveal before booting her down the stairs the sushi she ate was In fact made from her family leaving her in a dejected horror as she goes down the stairs.
not only scarring her mentally but if she's bound and dragged before her she can't even attack cozy in rage and then the one joy she could have found besides hurting the filly for the act would have been the stairs which in turn are used to hurt her and sandbar walking in would see her broken and being held over the tank in a suicidal way as she wouldn't want to change and live in the bowel and would drown.
that's how you get revenge as to her true revenge on sandbar turning his sister is a good start but what works better is turning her by making her brother hurt her by simply telling him if he doesn't silverstream would die and it would be his fault making him choose who gets hurt. and then bring in his parents and corals dragged away and make him choose between hurting her by not moving and letting her get beaten by the guards to save silver or saving his parents from being killed by moving and helping his sister which would mean silver would die while also knowing her friend didn't care enough to save her.
which at that moment would be a point of braking sandbar as he is stuck in a situation of save his sister his parents or his friend but what he doesn't know is if he moves to save his sister she will be killed like his parents would be . anyway he has to deal with the knowledge his sister is beaten and hates him and that he got his there parents killed or that him going to save her killed his friend and little sister and his parents would never forgive him and silver would end up hating herself even more and he would know that in any situation he's going to lose people close to him by his own actions or as cozy glow would grin evily at him she gives him a third final choice he can save them all but it would cost him his life which he would accept to Save the ones he loves and cares for
Sorry for the text wall btw but man this has got me thinking of just how to break them in revenge now
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I thought it was Komodo Dragons and a capybara.
Oh, gods, I love this. This is beautiful. XD
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Calm down Satan
Or whatever pony Satan is? Discord maybe? It’s Cozy not Eric cartmen though.
My immediate question is "the throne room is vertical enough to have a hundred feet of stairs, so the ceiling would be proportionally higher, and the first thing Sandbar is supposed to notice is the fishbowl stuck there, above all the light sources?" I'd be surprised if it didn't take a long time for entrants to even notice the throne or its occupant, and that's supposed to be the focal point.
No firm judgements yet on the plan with Sandbar's family, because whether it works lies deeply in the room for interpretation of Cozy's character and competence. (I aim on the low ends there, assuming her mark talent gives her a massive edge in seizing opportunities to move pieces but no insight or understanding of what she's doing to go along with that - making her better at getting her short-term way than a normal child of average intelligence but with neither real management skill nor vision. After all, it's just for playing games.)
That said... any value here beyond expressing spite requires Sandbar's little sister both to grow up enough to be useful as a ninja and to have some actual talent there. In the less long term, this means placing the rest of her family in your household, preparing your food, cleaning where you work, live and sleep, while said little sister is enthusiastically showing off to her family all the cool ways she's learning to kill somebody after a ninja does all the hard work of getting access to a household. I could probably have phrased that better, but do I really need to?