Name's Chase Vander Dussen, and I'm a brony and part time author of fanfiction.
We all know the drill by now, guy goes to convention, meets the Merchant, blatantly ignores common sense and buys something from him, and gets his ass chucked into another dimension. I should've stayed in bed today.
Note: All MLP characters are humanized but still have their traits such as wings and or magic.
My second attempt at a Displaced story.
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Just about to read this, is the chapter reference for the ones who are still alive?
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Yes.
Okay, I like the fact you actually used the Spartan time, but this chapter, I really didn't really like it, felt rushed, and random, like is the MC part Deadpool because he seems to like breaking the 4th wall, but other then that and a few other things this was..okay? Anyways I'll track and see how this goes
Also, please don't do what most others do and kill this, I would very much like having a Spartan displaced not abandoned/forgotten
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Don’t worry, I have no intention of cancelling it. I fully intend to continue this story. I just need to find the time to write it. Also yeah, Spartan time is something that’s never really touched on in the Halo games.
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That and most/all Halo stories on Fimfiction
Well an awesome first start.
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I am working on the next chapter as we speak. It's taking me a while as I don't really have a clear plot in mind. I'm writing this as a comedy.
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Next chapter is done. I apologize for the shortness of it.
What went wrong with the first?
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I didn’t like the direction that the story was headed since I didn’t have a clear plot in mind.
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Thanks for reading!
Random fish KEEP IT DOWN #SPONGEBOB LOGIC#