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that sonds like
GEFO by TheGreatEater

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Never heard of that one before. Whats it about?

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jest.. jest read it

but read
The Sweetie Belle Connection
first

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I'm not really a fan of eater's other stuff. Its always so stupid and random.

What is a drop of rain compared to the storm? What is a thought compared to the mind?

Not really my cup of tea because of the...I don't know, dub-con or non-con aspect? Or enslavement, more like? But very well written.

Saw the title and this was my immediate thought.

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And so many people quote this scene without realising that's a line from a Kanye West track :rainbowlaugh:

Good idea: Be a species capable of magically and biologically adapting to any environment.
Bad idea: Keep yourself in an environment that selects only for libido and obedience for weeks on end.

Silly Chryssy.

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Curse you for finding this story before me.

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Looks like Celestia may be "much different" in this story, but Chrysalis is exactly the same. (Open siege with a race of infiltrators... shapeshift yourself a brain, bughorse)

this was good:heart::trollestia:

“So you’ve found my hive, and identified a fake. Bravo Celestia. Pretty soon you may actually be an enemy worthy of recognition.” Chrysalis announced hautighly as she strode up to the alicorn of the sun.

Celestia smiled. “It's simple really. Every alicorn has accepted me as the absolute authority in the world, and pays me homage whenever we meet. This is done by submitting themselves to me in a more bodily manner.”

Chrysalis: "You are talking about innocently hugging, right?"
:trollestia:: *smirks*
Chrysalis: "...Right?"

“Have you forgotten the last time you underestimated me?” Celestia asked. “Didn't work out so well now did it?”

You meant that one time where Celestia gave Chrysalis her holes, right? (See the official IDW comics.)

Chrysalis leaned on one of the posts of the bed as she watched the alicorn closely, her curiosity getting the better of her. The queen assumed many possibilities, such as a concealed weapon, or perhaps armor or a wand. She did not assume that her enemy would be sporting the single largest dick not attached to a dragon.

It appears she had never been on Fimfiction..

Not like she was going to tell Celestia that, as the alicorn would likely say something like, ‘it was due to just how incredibly attractive I am’. Something Chrysalis couldn't deny, as a primal part of her was reminding the queen that the alicorn’s cum would breed powerful drones. A thought the changeling queen found utterly repulsive, as Chrysalis was not some lowly broodmare.

Seed from the most powerful pony, combined with the eggs of the most powerful alicorn?
I would expect you would approve that, Chrysalis. I mean, that sounds like you would get the most elite soldiers in recent history.

Other then the small ocean of alicorn spunk which was quickly being washed away, though even with the rain it would still take a while for the dozens upon dozens of gallons of sperm to be completely washed away.

Rumor says one of the more adventurous female drones collected some of it, hoping to get herself pregnant.

“No pleashe shpare them.” She slurred.

Her last free thoughts are about her own subjects.
That must count for something, right?
Also, technically Celestia only owns Chrysalis, not her subjects. As such, if the other Changelings decide they leave Celestia and look for a new Queen , they remain free.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

DID CRISSY EVER STAND A CHANCE ? OR WAS THAT HER PLAN ALL ALONG ?

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