Ever since she was a little filly, Pinkie Pie has wished for a human for her to care for, to be best friends with, and to have fun with. Hearth's Warming Eve is coming, and after the tragic events of Pinkie's sisters passing away due to a disease, Twilight attempts the impossible. And for once, it actually works. But is easily regretted thereafter.
(You guys I'm sorry I had to do this)
This is just a simple short story that I got the idea for when I was in class, and imagined an image of Pinkie Pie hugging a human (Yes, it was me). And thus, this happened. I have absolutely no idea whatsoever how this will turn out. I'm writing this to clear my writer's block, and to get me back on track with my updates and stuff.
Chapters (5)
Well, this is pretty good so far. Let's see where it goes....
I like it so far
Whelp, he's doomed.
That picture......
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Ever since she was a little filly, Pinkie Pie has wished for a human for her to care for, to be best friends with, and to have fun with.
I'm sorry, I read this and I immediately think of Pinkie just going "Ohhhh! Just what I always wanted! My own little human! I will name him George, and I will hug him and pet him and squeeze him..."
I'm gonna have to give this fic a read.
Interesting. Cant wait until next chapter.
I am going to see where this goes. I don't think they realize how intelligent he is with what little they about humans. Lyra gets in on this and instead of Double Trouble it becomes a Triple Menace (Throw in the CMC and Screwball and Ponyville will never be the same again).
"My best friend is feeling down because her sister has a bad disease... I know! I'll kidnap a sentient being from another dimension and give that poor sucker to Pinkie! That's obviously the best solution!"
*Le Me*:
Can't wait to see how this goes. Who knows what Pinkie will do with him...
1146377 Technically, it was both of her sisters, and they died. But I can see your point.
1147895 Thanks, I ended up skimming over it more and more as I read this.
Mmh... Yes, you got me interested. I want to see how this continues.
Thumbs up
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Le me to le you:
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Ah, the golden days of cartoons. Oh, the memories...
I love your description of the character voices!
I've wanted to do something like that myself; a human hearing all the characters before he sees them.
One thing I might add to Rarity though is that she has a British accent.
I presume the "normal" voice is Twilight's? If this is so, I must agree, it's hard to describe her voice as anything else.
I'm looking forward to what happens next!
One little nitpick I have is that I feel the language seems a little unnecessary.
Hmmm... Talia=Pinkie...
this could get interesting.
"Yer' not seriously gonna..." Applejack trailed off, as if she didn't want to hear the obvious answer lingering in the room.
"Yes. I am." Twilight turned to everypony, who was all looking right back at her.
"I'm going to get Pinkie a human."
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1146377 Yeah, that logic kinda kills any interest I might have had in this story.
i will read more of this later, if there is any.
This was awesome.
I'd love to read more.
Th... er of ... friend... comp... you t... WRITE MOAR!
More, need more. Dis gonna be good.
Tell us what you think
But also: our idea!
Next chapter first line:
"Uhhhg..." groaned Isaac "Talia? There were horses... What's happened?"
Lyra is going to be so jealous!
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I'll mix it up a little.
yesss moar please
1145546 I know where you got that Reference from and that just made my night.
To the Author: Keep up the work
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"My very own bunny rabbit! I will hug him and squeeze him and I will name him George..."
good story but I wonder. is this human small enough to be like a pet or is he big like all the HiE stories.
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You say "all the HiE stories" as if it's a bad thing. It only makes sense, really. My LITTLE PONY. The keyword was LITTLE PONY. They're little and they're ponies. I think that makes humans larger. It's not called "My Big Horse" for a reason.
1156830 geh now i feel like an idiot. it just sounded like he was small because he was in a box and all. still can't wait for more. do they even know he can talk.
and i didn't it was supposed to be a bad thing.
LOL! Pinkie gets a human as a present is a cool concept, you have my attention and am waiting for more chapters.
Also, there will be some slight references in this story. If you find any... Well, I'll do something about it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png . Toodles.
I don't know what to say about this or Greg. LOL
to fast. it all went to fast. and I though they would't know that he could speak.
And here, ladies and gents, is where the ancestor of Isaac Clark learns to dismember his foes.
I find it funny that i just finished playing the binding of isaac
Edit this to Pinkie's sisters dying from an outbreak of Quinese hoof-and-mouth disease. It's funny cuz it makes fun of people dying from the flu! And making fun of dying people is ALWAYS a good idea!
So when does Lyra show up and demand some humans for herself?
"Hey, am I gonna play any music or what?" The white pony at the turntable called.
"No, that will be fine." Twilight responded, turning the pony into a grumbling mess who was packing up her stuff.
Yanno, you could have Vinyl play some Phoenix Wright cross-examination music. Totally fitting :)
looking forward to future chapters, minor errors that peck at my sanity, but you are good at making a story ^^b
I can't say that I like the "unknown disease" bit. it just feels like to much of a cop-out unless it has something to with the story later.,
1161904 5/5 moustaches for you.
I'm enjoying this, but you really need proofreaders. For one thing, they'll help point out when you're going too fast, which this is, and help you flesh things out. For another, you've committed several no-no's of writing. Here are some that really bugged me, and stuck out.
Isaac made a mental note to not piss off Rainbow Dash anymore.
No. Just no. The only time narration should be interrupted by anything is during a fourth wall collapse. Mental narration and other people talking can be interrupted to give the feeling that the interjection is either loud or sudden, but not a basic description of a character.
Firstly, you suddenly changed tenses. Secondly, this is a really sudden narrator interjection, you can probably find a way to work that into Isaac's thought process.
That said, I'm still going to give you a thumbs up and a fav, because this story has oodles of potential, you just need to polish out the rough corners.
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and 5 
in my inventory now.
That is a total of 7
Guy gets kidnapped, wants to go back, then begrudgingly seems fine with everything at the end...
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hmm, shenenigans w/ pinkie pie? i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/295/561/d99
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I'm planning on getting editor(s)/proofreader(s).
interesting and things like what greg went through that "i coulda sworn someone sat there" moment makes me wonder sometimes, do i have friends i held dearly to me but cant remember them anymore? :/ meh anywho this has potential i shall keep tabs on it and what of his parents!? surely his mom couldnt forget something like birthing her son! o.0
Did you pick the name Isaac because of this?
http://www.behindthename.com/name/isaac