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That is how you use an F bomb. It shows genuine regret and self-hatred. Well played.
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Thank you
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It was really well put in this story.
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I try to think about how I would react in those situations. I also try to avoid keeping the dialogue and reactions from being hackneyed, detached or stilted. If you come across any misspellings, typos, odd jankey dialogue or sentence structure issues, don't be afraid to point them out, I accept all constructive criticism.
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I've actually noticed a lot of grammatical issues in your story. I would love to help. Maybe become your editor?
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The one problem I have is that I'm doing this mostly from a cellphone because I currently don't have a PC. If you want we can take this discussion to PM's and hammer out the fine details.
Smashin
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Thanks