This story is a sequel to The Storm on Ponyville
What started as a delivery on Rarity’s behalf results in Avon “Anonymous” Smith discovering the less-than-savory state of Klugetown. Two rival gangs have sprung in the aftermath of the Storm King’s rule; The Cat Callers, lead by the Abyssinian, Capper and the Jewel Runners, lead by the Diamond Dog, Bandit. What started as a bid for control over the failing town has fallen into constant rivalries and violence, with no end in sight.
No stranger to this kind of conflict, Anonymous begins the journey of healing a broken town.
Author’s Note: Although this is a sequel, no one needs to read the previous story to understand this one. It’s just an extension of the events from that fic given both are Movie related. This story will be my attempt at a more mature, but still comedic story that tackles gang culture, ethnic rivalries, and other things that are associated with a certain perspective that my Anon is quite familiar with. Also, if it wasn’t clear, this story is based off the Rubble King’s documentary.
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Whew boy, Avon's in for a shock from the prissy pony world he's used to (which occasionally has cataclysmic events occur, no biggie tho)
Writing looks pretty good. Hope thecrest is just as good!
First chapter seems pretty lighthearted, but I can tell from tidbits its going somewhere pretty heavy. The pursesnatcher bit seems kinda foolish, to go chasing down someone like that in a foreign town with a bad reputation. Though that supposes its a long pursuit instead of just darting out in a short sprint to grab someone.
As for the subject matter you seem to be heading towards, my initial reaction is "how do I say this without sounding like a dick?"
Ah Geez Rick, you really had to go and say that huh.
Pinkie is starting to rub off on Avon. Also, is this after I no longer walk alone?
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It would’ve been, yeah.
Why Is it cancelled?
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Just wasn’t up to writing it and I didn’t want to do the thing I personally hate where it’s incomplete indefinitely.
Aww, damn. I was really liking the premise of this.