The Night Shaft

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Omnishifter

Omnishifter #1 · May 17th, 2020 · 1 · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

I'm rather suspicious that this story has something to do with this image-hxxps://aryion.com/g4/view/600614
EDIT: I found you dzamie, mentioning a fic idea in the comment section for one of the sites the image is on. Wonderful, I was right, and am glad to see this is inspired by that image-

~~I certainly hope so~~, -because I love it, and this is not bad. I have hopes of doing an adaptation of it myself one day (though not like this story I'm afraid) so this was a welcome surprise

dzamie

dzamie #2 · May 18th, 2020 · · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

...oof, look at that rating. I suppose I should have put an explicit DLDR when I first published. C'est la vie.

10238749
Ha, yep! I found it on Derpibooru because I watch the "vore" tag.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #3 · May 18th, 2020 · · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

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I follow the artist on the site they are on most frequently, and it is a vore only site. That image was certainly a surprise though, both the first and the second. A few people on there wanted to see a story done of it...or just were drooling over Luna's loins. Don't blame them...

Also, I left a link to this story in the comment section, on the main site that the artist is on, for that image, so I don't know if that will do anything, but I thought it couldn't hurt.

dzamie

dzamie #4 · May 18th, 2020 · · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

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Cool, thanks! I left a link on the Derpi one, since an anon expressed interest in the comments section there.

10238949
You're welcome! It's nice to know I can help people experience new things in my writing. That's a very creative comment.

Omnishifter

Omnishifter #5 · May 18th, 2020 · · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

10238949
Oh, the things you could see in the vore community alone...

bonberjean

bonberjean #6 · May 18th, 2020 · · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

I liked the twist in the end... I gave an upvote to help things up

Exuno

Exuno #7 · May 18th, 2020 · 1 · · Dream pony does dream pony things ·

You're spectacular. I know the commissioner of that image and was excited to see it then, even more glad to get this fun fic out of it. The main scene is very strong, good work on how casual and authoritarian Luna is; though I feel like you could have taken more opportunities for the text to point out sexy bits.

The epilogue is wonderfully fine sweet writing though, A+ characterization and banter. I need you to write sexy, bullying banter a whole lot please.

Renodil