An ancient evil awakens in the darkness of the Everfree forest. It is a being that exists only to consume, to devour. it is a creature that even Celestia fears. And Fluttershy is the only one who can stand up to it.
Well, I am a brony, who goes by The Poet of Silence or sometimes xenodragon56 I like writing supernatural/horror pieces. BROHOOF! /)
An ancient evil awakens in the darkness of the Everfree forest. It is a being that exists only to consume, to devour. it is a creature that even Celestia fears. And Fluttershy is the only one who can stand up to it.
Jesus, ill get started right now
I SEE THE SIMON REFERENCE, I SEE IT, do I get a prize?
Anywhoser so far this is coming along very smoothly
Well, time to leave this tab open until I can start reading after work tomorrow.
The Slender. Old as time itself. I like this story alot. Please continue.
Cool. I SHALL READ MORE!!!! You deserve THESE for making a good slenderpony fic.
Hmmm... Goodness. o3o VIOLENCE. Anyways pretty good. You sir deserve a MOUSTACHEEEE
Awsomeness. But... Why trixie? And why is her blood BROWN? Anyways Dont kill the foals, Their innocent!
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The Slenderman kills children, so why wouldn't the Slenderpony kill foals?
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Also, Trixie is my all-time least favorite character...
NOOOOOOO!!!!! NOT DASHIE!!!!
I'm lovin' this
As long as fluttershy and twilight make it out sane and ALIIIIIVE im good
fluttershy quick, give them the stare from hell if you see them. like ghost rider did!
And I thought ironwill was the least. BTW slender man and the rake are two different myths.
Yet im confused. Is this story about the rake or slendermane?
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Slenderman AND the Rake, as well as several other Creepypastas that I feel like incorporating.
The Rake is sort of an ally to SlenderPony due to mutual benefit of prey.
FLUTTERSHYYYYY RAAAAAAGH! FLUTTERSHY SAVE US!
Shit's about to go down!
Shit son
... The Rake, now? Is that what happened?
Ah-hah. Someone pick up the phone... 'cuz ah BUCKIN' CALLED IT, y'all!
Anyway. I'm enjoying the story. But I mad you kill Trixie. >:(
Dat first commentdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png , I like this fic, even though I'm so late at reading it.
Applebloom is yellow, not green. And Sweetie is white ._. Sorry for being so dull, but yeah
Personally, while it is slender based, I feel that too many characters are dying. I mean, trixie, no one cares about, and angel, is a rabbit, but Big Mac? That was a shame if you ask me...still...I love these things and I eagerly await for the next. Keep it up.
SHIT
The dark side of the Force dun dun duuuuun.
No seriously, only the dark side of the Force makes you power-wicked.
Hmmmmm, she found a book. Check
It has a Dragon on the Cover.Check
It gives a great feel of Power and Confidence.Check
It's written in Dragon Tongue and is meant for DovahShy.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.pngYoU'rE mY BiTcH NoW, DaSh
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o ReAlLy?
1541003 The Gristers, one of my favorite Creepypastas ever
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHIT its about to go DOWN.
Trixie died = okay, whatever
Angel died = Yeeepeeee!!
Big Mac died =NOOOOOOOO!!!!! Why God, why??!
Awesome fic! Next Chapter!!
Oh, this is going along in such a way, can't wait to see what happens next...
Wow and weird
Just O-O
OH FUCK SMILE DOG. AW HELL NO.
I wished the pages we're here. :(
Ahh...I remember the time when I didnt know about dedicated site for MLP fanfiction and tried to find something about it on fanfiction.net. This was my first experience with MLP Friendship is Magic. And shortly after that I found "Cupcakes". You can say its kinda gave the wrong impression. About ponies, Equestria. And friendship. Yesss....
Proxies...
... Nyaaaaaaaaaah? D:
So how's BEN gonna be implemented into this?
Dam you!!!!!!!!! I mean really good story... sorry for yelling at you. 5/5
Scootaloo, its a trap!
YESSSSS KILL RAINBOW DASH
huh scooctaloo died or is badly injured eh? cant say that im all that sad but the way she died was a bit sad for me but good chap
i dont like where this is going
beep boop bop this contain no spoilers