He has studied the blade for years under the finest masters in all the land, mastered moves and techniques that men ten times his age took their whole lives to learn, and cemanted his place as the top of his class at the Nodachi Sword Academy. Now, when he is sent to Equestria without weapons or support, his skills will be put to the test when he faces off against unspeakable evils, dark conspiracies, and his own worst nightmares.
But his adventure will be known throughout the land as the greatest battle in history and his name will be remembered for alltime, as much as the romance between he and a certain butter colored shy pegasus.
That name...is Mingus the Mighty.
An Isekai story in case that wasn't obvious, written by me and edited by me and my GF Katana-Maru-Chan!
Why do I even bother writing anything? I'll never top this.
That's it y'all. Fimfic is over, Seth Standmore is the new king of ponyfics.
10323594 Thanckx's Scampy you have a good story too, your OC wallflower BLush is great, how do you have so much fan artof her can you reocmmned someone to be my artist for my story's, okay well have a good day
sincerely seths tandmore
Stunning.
10323613 thanckx's
I am trying to compensate all those Japanese names in America. Up until it was brought up, I thought we were in Japan - with all those un-American names and even Japanese Sword School. Nonetheless, the idea is sound for isekai story. Let's see where this goes.
10323745 This Is In A Alternate Reality Where Japan Invaded America During World War I And Conquered Montgomery Alabama So It Is A Japanese Colony anyway thanckx's you it is my first isekai please tell your firend's.
Remove the first one, you've already said it in the same sentence
10326817 the second thyme is four emphasize
I don't think Fluttershy has any accent.
10328128 in this story flutter shys parents adopted her from a japanese family
10328162
I see. Equestrian with Neighpon influence. I keep forgetting this is intend to be an Isekai story - not a Displaced one. Also, would you translate to non-Japanese on what did he say when he pull the sword out?
10328819 i will have to asx my girlfriend Katana-Maru-Chan as she is the one who used her polyglutton skill's to tanslate
10329093
Then, I suggest you to always add English translation at the end of the chapter (inside author's comment) so that everyone can understand and get what was going on in the story.
10329565 she has not responmded 2 me yet but when she does i will Ask her.
Wouldn't it be better to call him Magnus?
I have some suggestions.
You should put those bracket explanations at the bottom of the chapter (preferable in the author's comment, like a reference) rather than insert it directly in the story. They unnecessary bloat your paragraph and interrupt the readers' line of thought away from the story. Also, you don't need to express the specific of the color like HTML code. It is too mouthful, unrelated to the story (unless your character is a painter), and most people don't even remember what color those code represented (who could remember every single one of them?). One of the most practical for fan fictions is to insert the picture that most match your idea directly into the story. Help your readers visualize better and won't interrupt the reading flow.
Third-person Histories are much better to read since we the readers can have a much bigger vision of the world the author is writing that way if you wrote in 3° person your history would be much better, I say this from author to author but everyone has their individual styles of writing, just make sure yours is consistently good.
10382218 no His name is Mingus
10382326 that Information need's to be Their because if I wait until the end of the chapter to explain it my reader's will have forgotten it by then so it must be front ed and centered
10382371 i can See the wisdom in your word's thankcks
Thank god for Mingus, our hero and protector. Pedophiles are gross and bad, 'nuff said 👏
10383591 thanckxs you for your supper, I Seth Standmore believe that Pedophiles should not be allowed on Fim Fiction Dot . Net and, Minugs action's in this story reflect my stonce
Nooooooooooo HERO-SAN!!!!
I cant wait until Mimgus and futtershy finally SMOOCH
Minty fresh as always! Lookin forward to the next one
GUY'S HELP I ACCIDENTALLY PUBLISHED THIS CHAPTER BY MISTAKE ITS NOT FINNISH YET
10671379
Nautin suolatusta lohipalasta.
10671379
Can't you retract the chapter? Well, you can always edit the published chapter.
Woops
Ummmmm what ?
10323599
Ummm... Wallflower Blush isn't an OC. She was the main villain of Forgotten Friendship.
Are all of the sword academies named after swords?
You missed April Fools by a large margin there.
Or this could be serious... if so, then WTF!?
Educational!
10382469
So true!