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Ha, that's a nice detail!
Hm. I feel Maribelle is innocent. By the stated rules, only two people had seen the body, meaning that neither Button nor Maribelle can be the killer.
Theorizing as I go, even though the story is written far ahead. XD
Finally got around to reading this myself. Decided I should give my thoughts now before I get too caught up in the first trial.
Really great work so far! I admit, one of my big concerns at the beginning was if I would be able to keep track of all these OCs when you have so many of them, but I'm pleasantly surprised to have already gotten them all down. The only thing that still trips me up a little is occasionally forgetting someone's species or coloration, but that's basically every cast of pony OCs in existence for me so no worries there. And I suppose it'll only get easier as the numbers dwindle.
Also joining Jack here in saying I appreciate your attention to detail with not only outlining all the truth bullets but even including full maps. I probably won't be speculating as much as I kinda prefer to just go along for the ride and get surprised, but I will say that I did suspect Pinkie would be the first victim. As the only returning character, she was either going to make it to the end or pull a DR2 and be the first victim. I do have other suspicions about her, but I'll wait until I catch up to share them.
Anyway, awesome start! Looking forward to the big trial. #JusticeForPinkie
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Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying things so far. I'm hoping the characters become more distinct as time goes on, especially after the first trial. Be sure to let me know what you think of it as you get further in!