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light MC?
Is that Mind Control?
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Yes. It's very mild, more of a "giving a nudge to explore naughty fantasies"
I'm sure this won't escalate further out of Rarity's control. Nope, absolutely nothing to worry about here...
Damn, Twilight is built in that thumbnail.
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More liked mind changed.
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You mean like: "Changing your Mind"? Well, if it works, it works.
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Yes
So something that was never explored in the pictures but I assume the whole world changed otherwise Big Mac would be coming by wondering where his sister is. Though I would like to hear the backstory behind these new bimbos.
Oh my YES, hope to see more.
can't wait for the pinkie and dash chapters! :D
So when will the next chapter be out yet?
This was an incredibly fun read, and easily one of the more creative ideas I've seen in some time. Both the pacing and the dialogue were spot-on; still recognizable as original characters, but with the new personality slant. Looking forward to more shenanigans with the others.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed!
nice work hope to see more.
When are you going to make more chapters?
Bro, that was amazing, like, 10/10 top tier shit. You brought the picture to life better than I could've imagined, now all we need is the whole set! I need more of this!
When the next chapter be out?
Will any of the sex be m/f?
nice work
Oh, that was excellent. Top work on Rainbow's mental changes and physical transformation there.
Blast from the past. The transformation was a delight to read, showing the original personality both conflicting and eventually morphing. That said, I think Rarity went a bit overboard on this one, lol. More bimbo than assistant, I doubt RD could actually help with any real business work. I'm curious to see what jobs/roles are in store for the others, and if Twilight fights back (practically, she's the only one could against this situation).
More hints of Rarity overestimating her ability to handle her own creations. Oh, this won't end well at all... though I can only imagine what her other friends will think.
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Hey, Rarity said she's there to "help", she didn't specify what kind of "help" she had in mind
That being said, the long-term effects of turning one's friends into bimbos will indeed be a focus of the story.
Rainbow Dash the secretary? That's one position I never imagine her usual tomboyish sport-mare would do. Good job reigned her in, Rare.
Do hope you do more of this. A very fun read so far.
This is a really good story, great work.
Hope you continue this someday.