Hey everypony, im Navy Shadow. Also known as Azura
All the ponies in Ponyville keep diaries. What happens when the ponies don't get enough sleep?
All spelling and grammar mistakes have been fixed - Thanks Atom!
I am aware that fluttershy is quite OOC here
(maybe expanding this a few chapters to include other Sleep Deprived Ponies... Pinkie Pie anybody?)
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" "okay...., And what's in your shed?"
Fluttershy gained a blank and suspicious look on her face.
"Nothing, don't go in there either" "
LOL!!! THE REFERENCE!!!
......Shed. I died. That was excellent.
You might want to go back and edit some minor grammar issues though. The run-on sentences aren't too bad, and they make sense because of her sleep deprived state, but you forgot to capitalise "I" a few times, and I believe there was an instance where you didn't capitalise the T in "Twilight."
Besides that, I liked it.
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Fixed, thanks for the feedback!
Aside from the grammatical errors... I actually enjoyed this (the entries) ... you may have one of my likes... but I do suggest you get a proofreader.
Hahaha I enjoyed this greatly
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yes Sir Killjoy!
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Thanks!
I'm reading this in class. My teacher came by to read it and laughed at this. Had no clue she was standing there, I got a brohoof.
WTF just happened..
Needles to say, this was DAMN funny..
My Mood: Shed.
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Exactly the reaction i was hoping for
sleep deprived...
I'm sleep deprived right now; I'll give this a read
EDIT: after reading this I was...
gulping down a can of soda...
then I typed this:
"EDIT: after reading this I was...
gulping down a can of soda...
then I typed this:"
REPEATING...
anyways, strange story here I must say
That smiley face in your description has no effect on me! GO BURN IN HELL!
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NO YOU GO BURN IN HELL
1193016 NO! FIX THIS STORY!
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IT WILL BE FIXED AS SOON AS ATOM STOPS BEING A LAZY MULE
1193021 He can't do it either.
Shed is a mood? Lol Loved it
*edit*
I just got it, lmfao, it took me so long, but IT JUST clicked
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Yup
Hey hey hey...
What I tell y'all about comin' in mah shed?!
Enjoyed the reference there, Navy. Please do a Pinki-- WAIT, DO TWILIGHT SPARKLE THAT WOULD ABSOLUTELY HILARI-- ...Uhm, sorry about that. But yeah, you should do some more of these.
After you fix the GRAMMAR...
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already have
this was quite the enjoyable mood. and just after i stayed up all night last night when i was working on a shed yesterday. so her mood is quite understandable.
well great story, but i can't say i respect the hotdiggitydemon creepasta fluttershy ref.
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Hey Hey Hey..... What did I tell y'all about COMING IN MY SHED
Lol, fantastic XD
static.fjcdn.com/pictures/SHED.MOV.%2BStay%2Boutta%2Bmy%2Bshed%2Bokay_d8558c_3274906.jpg
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FUNNYJUNK IS BAD AND YOU SHOULD FEEL BAD
upload to imgur
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NEVER, I USE GOOGLE
Huh. So when Applejack goes a whole week without sleep, she's incredibly out of it.
(Applebuck Season)
(Dragon Quest and It's About Time)
Twilight can pull all-nighters and feel just fine.
But when Fluttershy goes one night without sleep, she's all "urge to kill rising" taken to an extreme.
Wait a minute, in the first episode, didn't Spike say that it was tradition to stay up all night on the eve of the Summer Sun Celebration? You'd think this would've come up before.
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they get PLENTY of sleep the day before though xD
This interests me.
And now that I got the ban hammer from Pinkie pie I'll keep reading.
moar please
Swearing Fluttershy is best Fluttershy
I didn't get your shed reference, evidently. It reminded me of a story where Fluttershy's parents came by and burnt the 'trees' she was keeping in her shed...she had to keep angel from running into the stove to try and save them...it was appropriate.
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Moar is coming!
Huzzah!!! Can't wait to see the others and how their days went
O__o
Congrats friend, you have officiolly made me freaked out enough that I had to use mind soap to get this outta my head.
Other than that, it was hilarious and you should do Celestia next.
4 people didn't wait for Twilight.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
"My Mood: Shed"
This...
You have no idea how hard I laughed.
For a second there, I thought sleep deprived Twilight was going to be a silly Twilight, but I guess she's just as irritable as sleep deprived Fluttershy.
Nevertheless, I like the idea and I love what you've done with it, but this only seems to follow the ponies over the course of one sleepless night. Like I mentioned in the first chapter's comments, all of them have probably stayed up for entire nights before. I get that Twilight had a busy day, but she didn't even manage to get through the whole night without going insane. You seem to be exaggerating the effects of sleep loss, and while that might be part of the point of this whole story, I think you can drag this out for the course of two or three sleepless nights for each of them.
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i could and it will probably make the chapters 3 times as long, thanks xD i'll take this into consideration
The "humor" is really forced and unfunny.
Also you may want to put the Random tag.
I command you to do Applejack next!
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Thanks for the feedback
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The list i have is
Fluttershy (Done)
Twilight (Done)
Applejack
Rainbow
Pinkie
Rarity
Derpy
Celestia
shed..... shed everywhere!
more of this please.
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More coming!
Even Celestia is fully aware of Twilight's insanity! Priceless!
SO. MUCH. FUCKING. REFERENCE.
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SHEDS, SHEDS EVERYWHERE
So... what's in the shed?