The Entity Has Breached Containment

All systems are down. All the others are dead. The entity has breached containment...

...and Twilight's the only one who can make it out alive.

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DmitriTheWriter

DmitriTheWriter #1 · Jan 2nd, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Well, not SCP, but definitely inspired by it.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #2 · Jan 2nd, 2021 · 6 · ·

Good bit of atmospheric dread, but this is too short to really set up the suspense it longs for. It just fells like an SCP short that happens to have a dash of pony. The "It was all a dream... or was it!?" ending doesn't exactly knock my socks off either.

Sorry, there's just not much here. Definitely needs more fleshing out to be as creepy as it wants to be.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Jan 2nd, 2021 · 1 · ·

This story is much shorter then I thought it'd be. Will there be a sequel?

origami

origami #4 · Jan 2nd, 2021 · · ·

The entity reminds me of the weeping angels from Doctor Who

HiddenEntity

HiddenEntity #5 · Jan 2nd, 2021 · · ·

And here comes the concrete jellybean

Joural

Joural #6 · Jan 2nd, 2021 · · ·

I thought this was going to be a slightly comedic story where twilight is the entity at first.
I thinkbI would have preferred that to this. Its far too short, far too blunt, and not nearly as subtle as it needs to be.

Schwabauer