Attack of the Dead Ponies

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Bronie312

Bronie312 #1 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 1 · ·

WW1 reference, love it!

Thule

Thule #2 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Jake The Army Guy

Jake The Army Guy #3 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 3 · ·

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Northguard

Northguard #4 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Rune Soldier Dan

Rune Soldier Dan #5 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Two combatants spar, Hindenberg agains the Tsar...
(Will give this a read soon!)

Pete100

Pete100 #6 · Mar 24th, 2021 · · ·

A true soldier fights not because he hates what's in front of him, but because he loves what's behind them

Is there a difference?

Octavia lifted her rifle and shot a changeling straight through the eye as green blood splattered onto the ground. Soon almost everypony was firing at the changelings, who were now running away in panic at this attack of the undead. So much so that they ran right into their own c-wire traps.

Wow, that’s sad.

Lyra and Bon-Bon were on a roll as they fired shot after shot without missing, Vinyl had been the most affected by the gas but she was still crawling across the ground and firing from her lying position, Octavia was firing with such ferocity she might as well been a different pony whilst Derpy was walking in front bayonet in hoof.

Do they need to reload?

The day after the battle, the bodies were retrieved and Ponyville was set ablaze.

Was that necessary?

SockPuppet

SockPuppet #7 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Love the historical allusion, but this reads like an outline; you're telling, not showing. This would have worked better if it clocked in at 10,000-15,000 words.

Northguard

Northguard #8 · Mar 24th, 2021 · · ·

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When I'm a more experienced writer, I may rewrite it.

Northguard

Northguard #9 · Mar 24th, 2021 · · ·

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Do they need to reload?

They're using Bolt-action rifles with five round internal magazines. So, yes.

Was that necessary?

It is a reference to the Russians demolishing Osowiec fortress when they left as it was only a matter of time before the Germans took it.

shining paladin

shining paladin #10 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 1 · ·

the attack of the dead men is one of my favorite horror story of ww1

shining paladin

shining paladin #11 · Mar 24th, 2021 · 1 · ·

this story is like the walking dead remix

Xinos213

Xinos213 #12 · Mar 26th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Love the story would like to see more of it and void blade is back as changeling again

Northguard

Northguard #13 · Mar 26th, 2021 · · ·

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Thanks and, hey, this time he didn't die.

Xinos213

Xinos213 #14 · Mar 26th, 2021 · · ·

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Which means he'll be back

Northguard

Northguard #15 · Mar 26th, 2021 · · ·

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Yup

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Redersunfim

Redersunfim #18 · Mar 29th, 2021 · 2 · ·

“At 11am on the 11th of november the guns fell silent on changeling surrender all in all a tragic loss equestria secured but at what cost? A generation lost we are forever in debt 100 years hence lest we forget”

History bombs world war 1 (also I changed Germany to the changelings)

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