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Black--Soul
German , Trying to write something worth while. Everyone start small after all. Enjoy the Story fellow Bronys (^///-///^)/)
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Greetings my readers
I hope you will enjoy my story. I have selfstudied 3-4 years for my english to improve to a level that i feel is good enough for my readers to enjoy
Should you have ideas to improve a sentance or use a alternative world that might fit better in a sentance, feel free to write it down in the comment section.
Constructive critic matters always and will be considered.
This story is inspired by MLP friendship is magic, the Synths universe as well as the Startrek community.
I will focus on humor, realism, adventures and moral dilema. There is a thick gray instead of BLACK & WHITE / good & evil.
Example:
Killing someone, it's murder or self defense? In the end somebody has died and leaves behind a mess in many ways. There is always some kind of consequence be it on a personal base or effecting a group of people/pony/ling etc.
Everyone not a Assembler has a mother/father.
Killing a Assembler still get the Hive upset so watch it!
Context is key. A situation with context can change everything.
I will go after finishing a chapter over it a few times to edit the occational typo and add humor and fun facts
Enjoy the text based ride and stay cuddly
This chapter can't be any more MLP... I really put a lot of effort into it. I would be very thankfull to be allowed to write my story now and have the Community give me constructive critic
Hope i keep everyone interessted.
Stay cuddly
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Edit: Chapter get edited by me, grammar here or there...
Aaannnddd done
2 years did the organic crew traveld trough the emptyness of space toward a planet with decaying orbit. 2 years did the Synth crew watch over em and cared for there resting bodys.
To have everything going downhill in less than 10 minutes? A heavy blow to overcome!
Hope you enjoyed my chapter. Next is how this incident came to be as well as Equis/Equus history. Enjoy the reading experience and dont forget to comment and if you have it, constructive critic
Stay cuddly ♡
odd, it is already marked read for me
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You test readed it perhaps?
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proably
I might be wrong but I think you should replace do with due.
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What is the way to see 'do' and 'due' need to be placed?
I learned thanks to a reader that for example
'There' and 'their' is difference is that one would be a 'place' and the other is used for 'individual / people' used.
Something like this just over a huge ship spread:
When ever updates are not coming fourth, remember this: