This is the promised rewrite to The Ghost of Cozy Glow. The 1st one in the series.
I'm Betty Jewel and I am sick and tired of being teased because of being a relative of a villain named Cozy Glow. Not only that, I'm also half pegasus and half human so that makes the teasing worse. I smashed Cozy Glow's statue in a fit of rage. For some reason, Cozy Glow's soul is now bound to mine. From that moment forward my life would change forever. In ways I never could've imagined.
When the chapters for this story are released, you can check this blog to see how many more chapters are left to go on this story and there's another blog connected to that one so you can see the names for the upcoming chapters.
Thanks for the editing from SunlightSwift chapters 1 through 3
I also want to thank Betty_Starlight for helping me out with the editing as well. She helped me edit chapter 4 through 26
This a rewrite of The Ghost of Cozy Glow.
Awesome story
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Thanks!
What's the human tag for?
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Because Betty is half-human and her mom is human. The original story had the same thing. This is a rewrite of the original story. Not to mention, Betty's brother Norman is human. The sequel is from his point of view. Edit: I took the last part of the comment out because it seemed mean.
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I do have blogs that explain what the characters are in The Ghost of Cozy Glow series. This story is a rewrite of the original one. I hope this blog helps you understand why there is a human tag.
Edit: I might've sounded mean in my original comment. Sorry but I do hope this blog helps.
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Half human - half pegasus..... Anthro pegasus incoming
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That's what Betty is, I don't get it, is there a problem with that?
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Well, because ... you know... just saying Betty is an anthro pegasus among ponies. Because you know, Human + Pegasus can be a centaur with wings or .... eh I forget that one. So it's vague that you say she is a half-human half pegasus.
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Oh so you're saying I need to be more clear on that? I can go and fix that. Thanks for the info!
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Okay I went and fixed the description of her. That was an oversite of details for her. I didn't realize I should've made that clear. The rest of the chapter is fine to me.
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*Glance at all of your stories* .... None of your stories is 70-30 ... Man I thought my stories were bad though.
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Ah just the ratio of like/dislike.
P/S: well I will post a new threat about the description mistakes though. Hope you come there and watch (Because I post many mistakes collector threads before)
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Okay then, that's your thoughts on it but I don't go by like/dislikes. I go by like to view ratio and it's perfectly fine. I already a couple of those downvotes were out revenge and spit. The like/dislike ratio can change in the future anyway.
Actually did you look at my like/dislike ratio of Equestria and the Machine or The Ghost of Cozy Glow the Second Story? Those two are actually doing very well on like/dislike ratio. Both of those stories are 10 upvotes and 7 downvotes. The Pony Protection Agency is an even split with 10 upvotes and 10 downvotes and once again a couple of those are revenge downvotes because people got mad and downvoted the story and probably didn't even read it because of being pissed at me.
The Gates of Equestria sits at 6 upvotes and 4 downvotes.
You might not be able to see the story Anything but the Spa yet because that one doesn't have enough votes to show the ratings. That's siting at 7 upvotes and 2 downvotes at the moment.
Okay yeah Attack of the Bronies was my worst that review I got for it pointed out why. That one is siting at 6 upvotes and 19 downvotes.
The Original The Ghost of Cozy Glow story is sitting at 16 upvotes and 19 downvotes. Again, a couple of those were revenge downvotes.
Drawn by pain is sitting at 3 upvotes and 4 downvotes, due to angry downvotes.
Go, Go Pony Rangers is sitting at 4 upvotes and 7 downvotes
Too Many Doughnuts on This Train is sitting at 10 upvotes and 3 downvotes and that one got a good review on it!
The Ghost of Cozy Glow- A Redux sitting at 6 upvotes and 7 downvotes
The Experiments at the moment is sitting at 8 upvotes and 11 downvotes
So I disagree that all of my stories are doing bad on the like/dislike ratio if that's what you're going by. A couple of them, Drawn by Pain, Go, Go Pony Rangers, Attack of the Bronies and The Experiments aren't dong so well at the moment. But Drawn by Pain, and Go, Go Pony Rangers don't have enough votes for them to show up on the ratings. Attack of Bronies is probably one of worst ones I did. Drawn by Pain and Go, Go Pony Rangers are canceled and I'm not sure if I'll go back and explore those anytime soon. Maybe but not right now. As far the stories that are still in progress, I like what I have written down so far.
And the like/dislike ratio can change in the future it depends. The original The Ghost of Cozy Glow ratings were a lot worse than they are now. So yeah.
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Okay? Where are you posting them? In a group or on your profile?
Note: I have help with editing and stuff so I think that's fine and I like what I have out. And in case you're wondering I will shed more light on what Death Walkers are in a future chapter I just didn't feel the need to do it right off the bat. I kind of explain what they are in chapter 3 but I meant to do that because I mainly wanted to focus on Betty's powers starting to grow and I show that staring to happen with her fighting her bully Marble. If you want to take a look at this blog it says what Death Walkers are and why they are needed for The Ghost of Cozy Glow universe.
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One more thing, in the comment to Starlight Nova I link it to a blog that explains what my characters are too.
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Okay, gem pony, let's read this. One more thing, please describe the character in the story, not in the blog.
P/S: I posted the thread on the group. I have many threads on there though (If you take a look)
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Okay then, I fixed the description of Betty in the first chapter but I'm not changing anything else. I think the story is fine the way it is now.
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Sorry deleted my comment to you by accident and I have no idea why I did it. I think I said, what do you mean by that? Don't worry about responding to this though. You already did.
She's a Stand User.
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What do you mean by that?
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She has a ghost follow her around
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Interesting yet another reason we should watch JoJo
Cool yeah I should probably watch JoJo it's an anime that's been recommended to me for ages.
SUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I think this scene is fine as it is.
Edit: Never mind, I figured out what you were trying to say. My bad. The error with the sentence 'I did a face palm and groaned is fixed.'
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Alright that has been fixed.
Shouldn't you complete this story before you start the sequels?
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No, this is a rewrite to the first one. The Ghost of Cozy Glow the Third Story is a sequel to The Ghost of Cozy Glow the Second Story. That story is already finished. So no I'm not waiting until this story is complete to release the third one. Like I said in the description this is a rewrite to the first one. I even linked this story to the original one in the description!
And please don't make anymore comments on my stories about them possibly being bad because of the ratings. It's making it look like you're letting other people think for you. I don't mean to be rude or anything like that but if I see you make another comment like that on another one of my stories, I might just block you because it's looking like you're trolling me by doing that.
And you don't have any right to tell me when I should and shouldn't release a sequel to my stories. Sorry if this is a bit snappy but you're getting on my nerves by making rude comments about the ratings on a least two or three of my stories now and now you're telling me when I should release my sequels?
You've been bringing up some good points about everything else why can't stick to those types of comments instead? And if this comment earns me another downvote from childish people being angry with me for speaking my mind then so be it!