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Silverstone28001


i like Yugioh and MLP and i have tried to write a story but it seems to be too short. i like to write with other people that won't leave the brunt of the work for me to do.

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Dwelling deep under the Crystal Empire two beings rest and recover from a long and torturous imprisonment. As they slowly return to the surface, times had greatly changed from what they remember and what the impressions of the Crystal Kingdom mean for them.

11/07/21 Edit: So I’m changing the main character to be easier on me to write. Aka the main character is going to mainly be a mare since I’ve dropped the crossover idea completely.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

What does the title mean?

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Prince of Light and Memory

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Thanks. What language is it?

Comment posted by Silverstone28001 deleted Jun 3rd, 2021

This is interesting. Though vague in the bio and a bit in the chapter, the suspense is there. Bio I'd give a 7/10. The chapter 8/10 for the suspense.

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Honestly I think it’s still too detailed you can basically already figure out three of the characters from the descriptions alone.

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3 out of 8 is only 37.5%. And I calculated that without a calculator.

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I was more referring to the characters that were exhausted. I recognized Cadence and Shining Armor basically.

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