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After turning in for the day, Luna has found herself in one of the most bizarre dreams she had ever experienced in her life: that she's in a reality where Twilight and Celestia's roles were reversed, leading to a potentially chaotic dynamic. Despite being a master of lucid dreaming and can easily alter dreams at will, she'd rather see how this one will unfold...
My entry for the Reunions Role-Swap Contest
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this was very funny
Congratulations, you just managed to give the "It was all a dream" ending... TO A DREAM.
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I dunno you're here so please tell me why are you waisting your time here?
Oh gods Luna, get on with the times
lol wtf
Now I’m curious as to how the other princesses reacted...
I'm just imagining her talking to celestia at breakfast
"Sister I had a wet dream last night both you and twilight sparkle an-
LUNA I dont want to know
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lol that got me good!!!
Take your like and fave and
neverdo this again.~Skeeter The Lurker
I've only seen that Always Sunny clip like 50 times but it's in your Notes? Clicked.
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"Very well, but at least let me tell you how I got blue balled by Discord afterward."
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Or maybe Chuck Norri- no, wait... That would either be a bit too much or would compound the problem further.
Oh Lord, I honestly can see all of that. Funny, take my upvote, but you need an editor to help with those narrative tense switches.
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You massively missed the joke my dude…
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Chuck Norris is the muscle wizard. I don't know who you're talking about, but they're clearly a pretender if they think they can claim that title.
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Chuck Norris is the Alpha Muscle Wizard all other Muscle Wizards wish they could defeat him. The only man who was a match for Chuck Norris was Bruce Lee. Only the Fear of Bruce Lee returning from the dead keeps Chuck Norris from ruling the world! (Seriously one of Chuck Norris's frost big breaks was as random henchman easily dispatched in a Bruce Lee film, he considered it an honor to lose to Lee)
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I did know about that.
Ahhaha
Not bad.
Pretty noice. Good show!
Hello, I am one of the judges for the Reunions Swapped Roles contest, and I'm going to share the scores that I gave this story along with the comments. Note that I was just one of three judges, so these comments do NOT reflect what the other judges thought of the story.
Quality 3 / 5
There were some awkward sentence constructions that did not read well, such as “And from it leapt six familiar figures, the Elements of Harmony who appeared to look tired and beat up, and of course Celestia, who still looked fresh despite fighting an entire army just to get here.” But apart from that, there were few errors.
It’s a pretty good story for what it’s achieving. There were plenty of funny moments to go around. Meta aspects were handled well. This sort of prank is also in character for Discord.
That said, I expected more craziness and build-up. Twilight could have been even more of a conspiracy nut, seeing as she’s the source of most of the conspiracies. More chaos is something that would have fit the story, especially since dreams are already naturally chaotic. A dream created by Discord could really be wild. More crazy events and higher stakes would also make the simple resolution of the conflict more of a surprise.
Roleswap originality/utilization 1 / 5
The student-mentor swap is not very original.
You only really talked about how Twilight was now the source of all the canonical antagonists. Due to the story being quite short, there wasn’t much more room to talk about how other relationships were affected. This doesn’t speak against story quality, but it does mean you didn’t focus much on the roleswap.
Prompt utilization 1 / 3
This story did not address the theme of “Reunion” at all. While the swapped Celestia meeting Twilight could be considered a reunion, you did not focus on that aspect at all. (Pastries are good, though.) Nothing else in this story could be relevant towards talking about a reunion.
Ha very amusing