On their wedding night, Cadance doesn't like Shining's reluctance to do terrible things to get off with her, so she cucks him as punishment and gets pregnant via the nearest royal guards. More sex, rape, some gore, and the occasional death ensues
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11053640
I believe there is precedent for dragging someone to hell with you, but it does require a certain attitude, and probably a lot of self-sacrifice. It at least requires choking down one's pride. It also makes a person (or pony if you prefer) very dangerous. It's a form of suicide since, even if they come out the other end alive, their previous life is over. It's like taking the framework of your life and making a bonfire out of it to cook your enemies over. It's quite a sight to behold, and not something you want to be the target of.
But I know such things won't happen in stories like this. =P Your fans no doubt want Cadence to remain unpunished and continue her conquest of others. And there's not really anything I could do about it, so I may as well bail.
I kinda do like the idea of hard-to-kill immortals though. Can make things a bit more interesting if your characters can die and respawn or regenerate later. I'm writing a sci-fi story with gladiators like that, with at least some of the unfortunate implications that come with having your fighters able to recover from almost any fatal wound. Especially if they're owned by private individuals or companies with a vested interest in putting them through the most intense and brutal situations they can think of.
And also, everyone's furries because I'm a shameless geek for talking animal characters. =P I mean, if you can custom order your android gladiators, why not make them any shape or species you want? They all get decapitated the same way.
11053788
That's quite the assumption! I assume that those that have read more of my stories just rolled their eyes at your assumption
Also as a general rule, when a story is not a commission, as this one is not, I write whatever happens to spill out of my brain without regard to what fans want. I think that's what my fans actually want me to do though so...
11053825
Well, I haven't really read your stuff, so I hope I can be forgiven for the assumption. XD Don't think it's really up to my tastes, so can't say you'll see much more of me. I only dabble in darker stuff now and then.
At the least, I'd hope Shining manages to get one up on Cadence sometime. =P Ain't much for abusing the poor guy.
11054133
If you want a more pure (but still erotic) experience where Shining enjoys the process check out the nicer version of this.
11053788
Here's a problem with that so far the only person she wrong did shining armor and Luna is getting justifiably punished she literally sets up situations to punish people for some of their dreams or stuff they do outside of their workplace. She would not be in this situation if she didn't do this to so many guards and maids just for having perverted dreams or doing stuff she dislikes.
11054915
Not gonna excuse that nonsense. I could also see it as stemming from a misunderstanding or lack of communication on Celestia's part. I mean, maybe she does indulge, but has to keep things discrete because of the popular view of her being "pure" and "virtuous". Maybe she doesn't go to the lengths Cadence does, but is willing to take on a lover or two. But that's all speculation and I'm running on a tangent again.
In any case, I did mean to include Luna when I talked about princesses acting like depraved European royalty (but I repeat myself). I wouldn't be surprised if some actual royals or nobles did exactly what Luna is doing. But I'm not sure if any real life examples are available. It's very hard to prove without some kind of record of their thoughts. So, it may be that only God knows if it ever happened. I'd be relieved if it turned out no one in power has actually done this. The less evil in the world, the better, even if I must be proven wrong about some enemy of mine.
In any case, forgive me if I seem to be ignoring or passing over Luna's sins for those of Cadence. It was not my intention, and I'd want both to be punished for what they've done.
Do you think beheading them would take? It's a pretty effective method against most things, even if it takes them a while to die. Alicorns might not be much different.
11055339
Don't know but they just regular ponies as much as we in the media like to use the word immortal alicorns are just ageless not immortal.
11055339
You made me think of the Queen that drowned because no one would save her due to a law that they could be put to death for touching royalty.
11055919
In the show I've not doubt that they are ageless at best, though I highly suspect they aren't even that, that they are just very long lived. IE How weak Celestia is when fighting villains now vs in the past could be explained by her finally getting weaker in old age. Nightmare Moon beating her so effortlessly as well could be explained by Nightmare not having aged for the 1000 years she was in stasis. This idea is behind my general head-canon that Luna is more powerful than Celestia, even if she wasn't when Celestia beat her before.
11056181
That's pretty stupid all right. But it was hard to read that article due to all the grammatical errors! Seems like they used some program to automatically replace misspelled words, but no one bothered to check to see if they were the right ones!
Stuff like that always bothers me. You'd think people could afford to at least read through what they wrote to catch such errors! Whoever edited this needs to learn better English, or at least how to do their job. =P