After Chrysalis gets defeated and Shining Armor and Cadance return to the ground, Celestia tells Twilight that she has a real wedding to put together. But after a few misspells, twilights memories are altered, and after all she THINKS they did to her earlier makes this her chance to lose her temper and snap at them.
(note: this is a reimagining of the work of xd77, go check out his story before mine, right here)
(and before you ask, YES i have been given permission to do this story)
(update: im ABSOLUTLY DISGUSTING, and proud of it!)
Chapters (10)
Looking forward to more
Keep it up.
Keep it up. I'm looking forward to see more.
What is going on with that cover art?
Needs editing.
Badly.
But will follow because this is bound to get interesting.
Is it necessary to be there
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Yea I agree with Wasp; this is simply a "reimagining of the work of xd77", so how is this a "sequel" when it starts after Chrysalis was defeated?
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if you read, there's a key detail that turns the plot on its head,
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that's part of its theming, its more comedic than the last one, i tried to make it look like some sort of play, but i have basically no art skill so this is the best i could do
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thank you very much
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Oh, I see. I kinda figured there was supposed to be a comedy tag somewhere.
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i recently added one
To be fair, Luna is right
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Indeed, another reason to me why she should the ultimate ruler.
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wait, didn't Celestia help twilight in "the return of harmony" by sending those letters back to help her remember her lessons after discord corrupted her?
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Yes. why?
Not just manipulated mind controls, honestly speaking shining armor of the only ones who don't have as much to apologize for and think about as everyone else. Shining armor because he was literally mind controlled by Chrysalis and Spike because he was just a child and going with what the majority of adults were telling him everyone else yeah fuck you
What I imagine the song would have been:
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to prove the point that twilight WAS helped by Celestia before, the whole point of her being was to create an aire that would secure the future of her ponies after she was gone. and alicorns live thousands of years, and she spent one thousand of that waiting for her sister to be released from the prison that was her own mind, even then, she still dealt with these issues, essentially proving she does do plenty for the kingdom, but you know your right, luna would make a good leader.
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thank you very much, that was beutiful
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and thank you too
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Your welcome
Twilight's going way too far. She has to realize that doing this has caused all her friends to leave Ponyville forever now and that was not what she wanted as that was not part of her plan.
Even though I think her friends need a lesson on loyalty considering apparently a princess wedding rates higher than a friend you promised to listen to when they were upset. Plus with a unknown threat against the kingdom anything that might be not right should be taken seriously and considering twilight reported seeing her brother put under a spell that made him go all googly eyed but a wedding with a good excuse for the spell was all they needed. Twilight knows a ton about magic yet nobody even considering that she could be right because wedding is more important. Though she is going too far to get revenge.
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they haven't left ponyville, and the idea of twilight in the story was to basically ruin their lives because she thinks they deserve it, so this is all part of her plan. plus going too far is a part of the farce.
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Nobody ever sees Luna in real life except for ponyville nightmare night most of the time so when she is still forgotten even though she is back from the moon. Who would remember a nocturnal princess who hardly ever is seen outside dreams. She could go to the gala which is a nighttime event but for some reason she doesn't show herself except really big emergencies most of the time. You can't remember someone who been forgotten to the point where there are no records of her existence. Otherwise ponies wouldn't have been surprised by the villain turning into a lost princess.
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Maybe so, but will she realize that her friends don't deserve to have their lives ruined all for what they did at the rehearsal when they apologize to her? And will she realize that she can't be the Princess of Friendship if she is ruining her friend's lives?
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well, that's the thing, their guilt may be so much that it may blind their own judgment and reasoning, its also part of the farce
Looks like the crowds want the princesses blood.
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I hear alicorn blood makes a great smoothie!
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Get to the panic room, were about to see FIREWORKS & SPARKS flying:
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So Twilight's plan here is to make her friends feel so guilty for how they abandoned her at the rehearsal and apologize to her sincerely to repair their bond with her they possibly shattered at the rehearsal?
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essentially, the ultimate plan for her is to take over Equestria by means of guilt.
I'm not sure twilight can fix what she messed up considering they also messed up and they have no idea why a wedding was more important.
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im digging myself into a logical plot hole
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Well good luck.
Wow. So Twilight herself now knows that she really messed up and must fix everything she did. Now that's what I call a responsible mare.
Is Luna going to T.W. & probably attempt to help her see the light of reason?
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not really responsible to do it in the 1st place but ok
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good thought, but as you can see discord did that for her, by showing her the truth
Huh? What is all that twilight saying she is a liar about? They all made a princess wedding more important than anything else and they all would have been doomed if twilight and cadence hadn't shown up in time.
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here's your answer, she literally admits it in this chapter
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Yeah but they did ditch her for the wedding and so she didn't lie about that and although the revenge part was wrong so how did she lie? Did she exaggerate their deeds?
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Fair enough.
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Fair enough.
I still have a feeling that those ponies that beat up Celestia SHOULD be arrested!
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i thought about it, but i think its been done before
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Where?
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i think a similar thing was done in loved and lost
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Oh yeah! I actually read that.