The end of an era...
After a 980 year war of ponies and dragons comes to an end, Celestia finds herself the victor.
And yet, as Celestia pulls her sword from the head of the final dragon, she cries.
An entire species is extinct by her hooves. She ponders if she would ever forgive herself for her actions.
And yet, as she began to lower the sun on this war something catches her eyes...
[I NEVER CREDITED THE INSPIRATION FOR THIS STORY SO HERE’S THIS]
Inspired by Winter Quill’s story “Sparkles and Scales; https://www.fimfiction.net/story/418748/sparkles-and-scales
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I believe u meant “end of an era” for the title instead “end of a era”
Overall it’s ok, the emotion and message are fine, but you need to get an editor or two. There were several misplaced words, and some misspellings (or wrong tenses, I can’t remember). Good story though.
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Of all the things I could have missed.
feasted
stallion
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Fixing it now
This was an interesting read. Great job with the concept. There are still quite a number of spelling errors, but other than that it's a beautiful fic. Keep up the good work!
Heya, just wanted to say, I didn't read your fanfics yet but they made me really happy already. (Also want to point out that I ship Discord and Twilight but don't judge me, please). I love both Discord and Deltarune and Undertale!!!!!
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No judgment here! Glad you are enjoying my stories!