Commander John Maxon unexpectedly arrives in orbit above Equestria after a 90 year interstellar journey to Proxima Centauri in Cryostasis. John must learn to survive and inspire in an strange new world.
A massive war machine that was once one of the most powerful things in existence now lies in the woods, without use. However, once the freedom of innocent citizens come under attack, it must reactivate to protect those who cannot protect themselves.
fallout's timeline is diverges from us long before my little pony. very low probability for them to have the same show with same storyline. this level of self-awareness is working for anon fanfics because that's literally their only isekai cheat. it's a different story with a mary sue character like fallout protagonist with in-game mechanic abilities. such combination is hard to write because the protagonist isn't an underdog, doesn't receive automatic sympathy from readers. and low stakes because the protagonist got both knowledge and power.
I got to say man this story is freaking awesome!!. But I do have some ideas if you want to listen. Like maybe adding the alien pistol or perhaps showing princesses of the food from her own world like Nuka cola.
11623446 I hope to get there eventually to be honest I had been dreading writing the spar, because I didn’t know how to write pony steel in a serious fight. I mean steel in fight means gun go bang and they dead. Yet I can’t kill shining armor so I was left at an impasse for a few weeks
An interesting idea you got there. Kinda reminds me of a dream i once had
Very brave, i give her that
Heh, techlogical Revolution, eh?
Interesting indeed
Loved the reference you did
fallout's timeline is diverges from us long before my little pony. very low probability for them to have the same show with same storyline.
this level of self-awareness is working for anon fanfics because that's literally their only isekai cheat.
it's a different story with a mary sue character like fallout protagonist with in-game mechanic abilities.
such combination is hard to write because the protagonist isn't an underdog, doesn't receive automatic sympathy from readers. and low stakes because the protagonist got both knowledge and power.
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Who says it’s the same?
Short but good
short but good
a short but good chapter
Hm... Why is Twilight not dead? Mini nukes are not a precision weapon.
More plz
skyrim references~
Why isn’t there a dark tag?
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Does it really need one?
Short but good
I got to say man this story is freaking awesome!!. But I do have some ideas if you want to listen. Like maybe adding the alien pistol or perhaps showing princesses of the food from her own world like Nuka cola.
At least she gave him a chance to give up
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I hope to get there eventually to be honest I had been dreading writing the spar, because I didn’t know how to write pony steel in a serious fight. I mean steel in fight means gun go bang and they dead. Yet I can’t kill shining armor so I was left at an impasse for a few weeks
At least it was a good fight and a good chapter as well. Can't wait till the next one comes out.