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WildWPony


CDL driver and mechanic by day and writer by night. Help me become a better writer and spread the magic of friendship

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Now that war has come to Equestria, he needs to balance a war, family life, and deal with a broken horned mare out to kill him.

Ha! Really Tempest? I like to see her try! :rainbowlaugh:

Good thing our Ninetails ISN'T weak against electricity. :yay:

nice can't wait too see more soon:heart:

Aw man, yeah. This is a way to start the 3rd installment if this great story. I can't wait to see what a few months break and time to yourself, friends, and family have done for your creative thinking. By the way Would, I just want to make sure you are absolutely sure about what you said for your The Lost Heir story. Is it truly finished or does it have a possible 3rd installment coming in the next coming months? Again, I'm just asking and I'm sorry if you are getting tired of people asking about it. Anyway, it's great to see you writing again. Stay safe and keep up the good work.😄👍😄👍

Red should really talk to her in her dreams.

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SShhh 🤐 no fair getting ahead of me.

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You're serious? I just suggesting that.

I look forward to the next chapter is great so far

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Yeah "A Lost Heir" is officially finished.

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'sighs'. Ok, well it was a fun trip while it lasted. Also, it's still fun to reread every so often to keep it fresh in my head. Anyway, I can't wait to see what else you have planned for other stories and more chapters. Stay safe and keep up the good work.

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Love this story, can’t wait for more chapters, keep it up. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you. Glad you like it. The next chapter will be posted tomorrow. I usually post one chapter a month, going up on the last day of the month usually.

"Hopefully, he doesn't know that Tempest has gone rogue with Chrysalis yet '' he knows :facehoof:

Phew, now that was an amazing chapter. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for Emmit, his herd, Tempest, Chrysalis, the storm king, and the other characters in this story. Keep up the great work and stay safe.

Gah I've missed the next part of Emmitt's story so far nooooo (tbh I forgot about Emmitt till I found this part today sorry)

I keep imagining that twilight gets impatient with waiting for the war to end and of course doesn't wait until they can do it safely. Though one thing I've never understood is how the artifacts ended up where twilight and friends got them considering starswirl and company left them at stone henge considering those artifacts would have had great value to anyone looking for the pillars and someone would have needed their help sooner or later.

Well WildWPony, this is a good chapter. I can't wait to see what else you have planned for them to do and what you have in store for Tempest. Stay safe and keep up the great work.

I can't wait for Emmit to teach starswirl a thing about manners and fair trials.

Oooh man. This is getting really good. I can't wait to see how this is going to play out. Keep up the great work and stay safe WildWPony.

First of all I waited 3 months for a chapter like this it's ridiculous for one thing chrysalis got what she needed I mean literally just with a flashbang she got everything she needed and just left like it was so easy and then when she released the shadow Pony no one shot at her but they shot at the big pony they had a sniper rifle they could easily took out chrysalis

Loved starswirl getting handed humble pie. Too bad he refuses to admit that he might have been wrong.

Okay, first of all I love this series of stories, I read the first one I loved it, I went straight to the second one and it was just as good an experience, the way you introduced the events was very well executed, as was the way you introduced the hippogriffs/ seaponys, it wasn't thrown out of the blue there was a mini dialogue that implied that Celestia and Novo already had some friendship, which is a genius move on your part and this culminating in the reveal of the Storm King as an enemy for the next amazing season! Detail I liked that Novo in your story is a woman without fear of making advances and that you, from what I understand, intend to introduce both her and Skystar into Emmit's herd/harem, which I approve of the small amount of stories involving them impressed me . Another positive point, Tempest's redemption was well done, it's not complete, at least I think, I think she'll appear more, maybe even fall in love with Emmit.

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Now a question, which if you are irritated by this, you don't have to answer:

Do you intend to do a fourth book when this one ends?
Because I kind of realized that in this one maybe you just adapted the events of the seventh season along with the 2017 movie. So I would like to know if there will be a fourth book adapting the eighth and ninth season, since a lot happens in them, and there's even more girls to add to the herd/harem.

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I agree with you. That was very good!

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Yeah even children can be polite around rulers but he was so set in his own way basic manners were beyond him.

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Thank you very much for your compliments. A fourth? Not really, I'm not planning on a fourth. I plan on wrapping everything up with this one, including the longer-term relationship with the Empress, Red. I do have a couple of other stories I'm tinkering with. And even after I end with this one, there will be some porn one-shots called "Ninetales: Nighttime Escapades". Some of those single-chapter episodes might have more profound insights into Luna and Nightmare Moon.

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The right. In fact I expected you to adapt the series until the end. But ok, the author and you the decision is 100% yours. It was a good story, but as they say, every story, no matter how good it is, has to have an end.

Well, I thank you for the chapter, It's very nice to read a Celestia that isn't bashed , although it;s fine, after reading thousands of stories where Celestia is the antagonist get's rather old and quite annoying at times. Your stories were a great read and I appreciate your work ethic.

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Thank you very much. I'm quite enjoying writing this one and just put out another chapter. Thank you for reading.

Thanks for the chapter. And finally Chrysalis is coming to the right side of the force, besides that I feel Novo's clop approaching.

Happy New Year!

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Will Novo and Chrysalis be the latest additions to the harem/herd? Or will there be someone else?

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:moustache: I guess you'll just have to wait and keep reading to fine out. :twilightsmile:

Jeez, this is such a great story. I can't wait to see what else you have Novo do and how Emmit and his girls will handle her. This is getting really good. Happy New Year WildWPony. Stay safe and keep up the great work. 😆👍😆👍

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Thank you very much. Hope you had a good Christmas and New Year. Be safe and may this year be better than the last one.

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Same to you about this year being better than last year. By the way, I'm curious about something. Are you going to bring Sunset into your Ninetails story at all and have her interact with Emmit, Celestia, Twilight, and the rest of the gang or is she going to stay in the human world? I am just checking because of how your The lost Heir story had Sunset being banished from Equestria for the rest of her natural days. I just wanted to see how you would handle it when the Equestria girls short where Sunset's human friends have their memories of her erased and when Starlight goes to the human world to help Sunset with the magical mirror problem. Again, just curious and checking.

When we get a scene with him and Cadence

Chrysalis' crisis is very good and very well written, we see that she is in conflict with whether or not she wants to be someone better, seriously, you did it well. I can see a possible future chapter where Emmit pays a visit to Monte Airs, spending the entire day with Novo and Skystar thus deepening their relationship. I don't know why but I'm very convinced that Skystar will be part of the harem/herd, both her and Tempest and Celaeno. I don't count on Novo and Chrysalis, in my prediction because they are already confirmed.

And again, great chapter! Until next time at the end of February.

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Thank you so much. I'm always striving to be a better writer so that's good to hear from my readers.

Well, Wild, you did a very good job with this chapter. It seems like your storytelling is getting better with each chapter you release and I can't wait for the other chapters to see how you have things happen. Stay safe and keep up the great work. 😆👍😆👍

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Thanks, that's good to hear you think so. Stay safe as well.

They all have every right to still be suspicious, and still be pissed at her. Despite everything.

And how would Emmint's dad react to Chrysalis? He has the right to at least punch or blast her, for everything in the past.

Now it was my turn for my jaw to drop and look at her with disbelief. And after pulling away from her, it was my turn to challenge her. "Now hold on a second. I did the same thing and you just ignored me. So, why now?"

Exactly! Chrysalis is such a hypocrite. IF I were Emmit, I will still be pissed about that. And want to talk about that issue more with her in the next chapter. And about Stygain, are we gonna see him interact with Starswirl and the other Pillars personally in the next chapter?

Because it's better to show, than tell.

"I don't," Chrysalis said immediately. Then she paused and her eyes widened as if suddenly realizing something. "Wait...I...really don't. I'm not hungry anymore either." She looked over at Emmit with those wide eyes filled with shock and now even a little fear. "I know you said that I wouldn't be hungry. But why don't I have the desire to conquer Equestria anymore? Why is that gone? What did the change do to me?"

"It brought you into harmony with the rest of Equestria, Chrysalis," came the Tree of Harmony's voice. She appeared to our right, Chrysalis left, with a wide smile on her crystal Twilight-looking face. Then we watched her look at our husband with a wide thankful smile, walk up to him, and lightly kissed him. "That's from her Empress for a job well done," she said then turned back toward Chrysalis once more. "Let Emmit and his herd be your guide to your new life, Chrysalis." And then she faded away and left.

It was then that we saw a look of realization spread across her face. "She tricked me," Chrysalis said softly as if her mind was still trying to process that information. "The Tree of Harmony tricked me."

"I believe she did," we heard our husband say with a tone of voice that told us he, too, was a little shocked by it. Then his voice turned humorous as he chuckled, "I guess I'm rubbing off on her."

The Spirit of the Tree of Harmony did a reverse psychology tactic on Chrysalis, bitch!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild:

Mad respect.

Man Wild, this is a good chapter. You did a great job with this. I'm surprised you really had Chrysalis change. I'm not mad nor will I argue about it, just surprised. Either way, I'm happy for what you did for Rockhoof and Mistmane. Of how you have things going so far, I really hope you do something equally as good with Starswirl and have him soften up like he did in the show. I really hope that Tempest will find some point she can love and be loved by. Anyway, stay safe and keep up the great work WildWPony. You really deserve all of the good things that you have because of your good heart.

I wonder how long it will take for starswirl to lose his pride and face the fact he was wrong about his friend and he shouldn't judge something without knowing all the facts.

Looks like starswirl is starting see how he messed if he had bothered to the whole story in the first place the pos would have never come to be. All those who suffer after he went villain could have been avoided if he had gotten the other side of the story.

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