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Disembodied_Pony


I'm no writer, things just pop into my head

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She wasn't born a princess, a pony, or even a she.
He adapted. It was either that, or crumble into dust.
'When in Rome' the phrase went. Even when the proverbial 'Rome' was built by quadruped equines.

The universe had a purpose for him. Or perhaps another universe did, and bartered?

Having escaped the fate that the entire crew met by no actions of his own, there was no going home, only forward. His new life was about to begin again, in so many ways.

This story comprises of the non-anthro ponies of Equestria, and what our main character became, thanks to them...
Though they had no idea he was even there, and had saved his life. At least, in the beginning, they didn't.

In her life she's seen incredible things; A planet of pegasi, A world of alicorns; Connecting the princess sisters to a now-frozen world, and the magic that got them to Equus before it became entombed in ice...

As well as another space-faring species; That was less than friendly...

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 20 )

is the mc going to become celestia? i look forward to seeing how luna comes into being if that is the case

Now this looks like it’ll be interesting. Can’t wait to see what or where we’re introduced too as they wake up.

Comment posted by Disembodied_Pony deleted Jul 8th, 2022

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Thanks, though I'm going to be really struggling with keeping this story engaging. Large scads of time in study, and terraforming a suitable lifeless rock... The latter being an interesting visual spectacle, but in text form? -ugh-
I've had this world in my head for the last four? years, yet this had very little interaction with other characters to sell it with. We'll see how it goes?

I'm liking the premise so far, but a few issues are glaring at me. For one the dialogue is a bit hard to read, it is hard to tell if either a new person is speaking or it is simply another paragraph. Also, some information feels missing, I get that more will be revealed later, but the way it is written now seems like we should know stuff that hasn't been mentioned yet.

Other than that though, really like this idea, and I hope you go far with it, I know I will continue reading.

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Much thanks. I made a tiny edit. I'd be grateful if you could post an excerpt of one that's (surely) still there. I'm probably just not seeing it.

interesting to have him pretty much trapped unless he is able to educate himself into an authrity position on the ship. hell of a motivator to learn or die slowly

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Sadly no. I was very politely asked to not, and I have to respect that.

So I won't be including cover art for the indeterminate future, I don't want to distress artists.
Bummer though, I found it a wonderful visual representation of the story's theme. And it was beautiful work too

Posy Meadow...that name sounds familiar.

just found this it is really good so far

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Uh-oh, did I reuse a name without realizing it again? She's supposed to be a common named earth pony.
Like, Mary...Smith, etc.

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It's making me think of G1 for some reason.

Comment posted by Disembodied_Pony deleted Jul 8th, 2022

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i am mostly intested to see what she/he did as princess

This is a nice chapter.

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