Found in what remained of Ponyville XXXX years after the Event.
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What was the context? I couldn't find the timestamp.
Still, I liked the Lovecraft-esque.
Oh. Oh no.
Fascinating and horrifying way to weave together the generations. I can’t help but wonder if this is the origin of Morpho Knight. Nothing less than the all-consuming Void can overcome this monstrosity. Thank you for this, and best of luck in the judging.
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In the Maretime Bay Adventure video game, there's a butterfly named Shimmerwing who guides you to your next objective if you get lost.
Why isn't there a tragedy tag?
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Tragedy is generally when the bad outcome is due to faults in the protagonist's character. In this case, it wasn't really the writer's fault. He was being manipulated by an outside force.
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Yep, you said that on my review of the game, too, haha.
Poor *illegibly smudged*. He/she deserved a better father/husband. But no, he had to bring doom upon Equestria!
Darkest Dungeon vibes, the good ones. Good story!
Well that's not ominous at all
Aw hell naw G4 got cosmic horror'd 😭😭
The video timestamp doesn't seem to be working. Could you indicate the relevant part of the video?
Ok, at this point in time, we know the following about our mysterious writer
-fully grown
-stallion
https://youtu.be/Nu1NX6Rt6vY
Edit: turns out the main character isn’t Twilight Sparkle, so nevermind ignore this comment
Wait WTF it’s been one month????
This stuff right here is why America nearly has a 50% divorce rate.
OMFG was writing “redacted too overused???
Me after reading illegibly smudged for the 10000 time
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do love depictions of post-canon Ponyville striving to be a place for all creatures, and that definitely makes the Breezie migration more ominous!
aww, hints at how pony psychology differs from our own! it certainly would explain just how often and how enthusiastic ponies are about getting wrapped up in group songs, as well as just how easily and often ponies seem to rebuild their buildings
if this is referencing something, i have no idea what it is, so i guess i am in the horseshoes of the unnamed narrator here! i would definitely be a bit freaked out by this strange bug
aww, already a contrast with just how nice the narrator's life was in the first chapter!
well that is a very mundane place for this mysterious bug to lead the narrator to! glad they had fun at the arcade, though
hehe, Ponyville is dense with those, isn't it?
that definitely concerns me more than if Lucky did not do that.
hehe, a sentence that can only be said in the context of Equestria, augh i love this place. also, i bet Rarity and Maud's fashion show was really great! pearls before swine...
what a beautiful name!
augh that really is too adorable
yeah i don't blame her...
curioser and curiouser!
aww, so cute!
oof, that is quite the contrast to the previous paragraph!
oh yeah that is an interesting mix of registers. i do wonder where this will go
oh wow this guy is absolutely speedrunning these life milestones
aww, just like his mother, how perfect!
well this is making me speculate that Lucky is some sort of magical life-parasite, and the narrator's son is a continuation of its life cycle. also, yay Tempest Shadow!
well then! that doesn't sound good!
yeah i guess the allure of a magical bug that watches you at all times except when you're in the bathroom would be a bit undercut by it needing to eat or sleep
hahaha i do love this mental image, of the wife just effortlessly yoinking away the mysterious eldritch not-butterfly. honestly it would be a pretty funny comedic ending to the whole story if that is juts how it ended
oof, would really hate to be the wife right now!
least insane Equestrian
oh hey that's us we found the diary!
dang, 48 pages of this! that is dedication
oof, that didn't last!
aww, so that's why all the names are redacted!
hehehe, as a shaggy dog story that brings together an explanation of the G4-G5 transition and a way to make a video game contrivance make sense within the context of the universe, this was really great! and the contrast between the very bright and fun vibe of the game and the sinister implications of the eldritch creature behind it is just very fun. i am a sucker for stories with elements like this, and enjoyed them greatly. thank you for writing!
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Thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed! Seriously, your reactions were greatly funny.
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See but it's not redacted it's just unreadable, redacted means they have the info but won't share it.
Guys I think it may know
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The diary writer is male, he calls himself a stallion couple times.
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Thanks
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Are you reealllly sure?
You can has review!