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Captain_Hairball


A Warning to Others

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Frazzle Rock can't believe her good luck to have attracted the interest of a young, beautiful mare like Izzy Moonbow. But when an encounter with a mystical gem at the Equestrian museum brings back a traumatic memory from her past, will she find the strength to be vulnerable to her new lover?

Totally fluffy, low-stakes datefic. AU for Frazzle and Izzy existing in the same historical period. Rated teen for references to alcohol, dirty jokes, and mild eroticism.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

I love the way you wrote Izzy, it’s perfect. I very much enjoyed this story ^^

I wish this was longer, so I could see their relationship develop further. It just sort of stops abruptly. What's here is great though.

11290646

Thank you! Glad you're still around.

11290666

I get a lot of that. I wrote a 130K word pony novel, somebody told me it was too short. :rainbowlaugh:

And then I went and got another juice box.”

Based.

Despite being about as crack as a ship could get, somehow this works. Color me impressed.

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The cracker the better, I feel.

Crack-er? :trixieshiftleft: There has to be a better way to say that.

You do relationships really well and this got unexpectedly deep in the feels and very heartwarming. I like the way you make the discussion of personal identities so natural, too. It's something that's always been really interesting to me, even though I'm there with Frazzle like "well when I WAS YOUR AGE we had STRAIGHT LESBIAN and GAY" and yes. I like that you can bring together generational differences and perspectives without making them clash, and the way Frazz is genuinely interested but Izzy respects her needing to figure things out for herself.

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