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ProfessorArgon


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A stallion goes through his life seeing the world and all of its wonders. An Odyssey of of self discovery and reflection of what one has done with their life.

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You put double "of"s in the description, there.

Also, try spacing out your paragraphs with an empty line in between them. It makes it easier to follow the text.

Oh, sorry, I was kind of in a rush to do it. I had limited time.

And as for the empty lines, I'm sorry about that, too. I Was trying to conserve space. Weird, I know, But it works. :moustache:

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