The busiest day for the Apple family selling their products out there and it's the busiest day ever but unfortunately Grand Pear is not feeling too well due to his toothache and Applejack cannot do it and so is the family so she asked Sandbar and Gallus take him there and it's a simple routine but things will be much difficult that they expected.
Credit a good friend of mine from Tumblr frithislord aka frithnotdead aka frithlives for helping me with ideas. https://frithlives.tumblr.com/ thanks buddy
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I thought I recognized the scene!
This was comedic gold!
But I'm sure Gallus is going to be in serious trouble for this! Not even accepting the responsability of your reckless mischief? That's a paddlin'. Grand Pear will probably scold ya! And you'll probablt have to clean the restrooms!
Also I love how Gallus is a secret Trakkie. And I love how you made Grand Pear related to Star Trakk through a unique role through his food.
I wonder what problem Berry Punch had that was so urgent?
Anyways great work! I had quite a laugh with those two silly kids.
(Although there are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. You might want to fix those.
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Thanks I'm glad you like it and truth be told me and my friend never really thought of the consequences of Gallus action and I would have imagined him and Sandbar will have to clean up the office after the little stunts.
And my friend help me with that situation because I had a hard time trying to figure out how to fit this whole situation and how it's connected to the joke of the Star Trek reference when they were affected to the gas
This needs proofreading, but this has a good storyline, great star trek references, and a funny conclusion. Nice job!
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Thanks I appreciate it and I probably need some help where the spelling errors are and probably figure out how to fix the problem
Lol this is so funny stuff here bro you two did a pretty good job and I really can't imagine those two in themselves in trouble and the jokes are pretty corny but really good and I figured Gallus would have love watching those show
And I know where the reference came from
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What is this movie?
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Death at the funeral 2010
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You're welcome! Grammarly, whether you use the free version or the paid versions should be able to help with the mistakes. :) Have a nice day!
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This was a really good story. I liked it very much.
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Thanks I appreciate that 😊
This is pure gold! I enjoy it. Hope you do more in the futures
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Hopefully and thanks 😊