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that went from 0 to 100 real quick, can wait to finish
finished, good story
i want more.
She's definitely going to use that...
Nice
My favorite of your work so far.
I am not usually very into explicit foalcon on a good day but this really some something.
It doesn't feel like a single word was wasted. It was well written, and Icicle was a very entertaining Mc. Lucky Streak just as well was naive but sassy and knowledgeable. It got to the point but buttered the whole way with humor that was soaked into the wording rather than done explicitly. The characters feel like they wrote themselves. Like there is real passion in this one.
The interactions felt organic, even in the way they were disturbed by potential customers and Lucky's character never flinched and remained believable and entertaining all the way through.
I don't feel like there is some tragic victim here. They just feel too human and the way one thing gets to the other just felt so organic all the while. Things did escalate rather quickly but the way Icicle handled it was so appropriate that it still felt organic.
Probably the best comic porn I've read in a loooong while.
Good Job, 10/10
Pretty good. Though some parts — like how he’s instantly ready to go again or how oblivious that colt was — strain credulity.